quick keystyle(feedback appreciated)

[DARK]

Just a quick key,peace.

Steppin fron the Dark,here comes a real mic controller//
The platinum mic holder,fuck M.O.P,my rhymes are colder//
Watch over your shoulder,cause this soldiers on the warpath//
I drop war raps,leave jaws cracked,break whores backs,then haule ass//
You cant ignore that,i leave cats hooked like crack dependents//
these nothing in your defendence,i rip cats with one sentence//
your rhymes are irrelevent,im takin lives,like cancer//
Im askin questions of your style,but you dont have the answers/
Now "who's the master",Im standing Darker than black panthers//
And If you wanna,step up,i like rippin wack chancers//

Aint aimed at no one,im bored so i thought id just drop a quick key to see what feedback i got!!!1

peace...#The Dark~

[So Solid Player]

not bad not bad

Pretty tight dawg, not bad for a keystyle, keep postin

[Ian]

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I like it, I like it.... that M.O.P Line was tight..

The platinum mic holder,fuck M.O.P,my rhymes are colder

Someone explain to me what the hell a keystyle is though

Laterz

Hey Solid, I Like the image

[DARK]

thanx!!!

Thanx to So Solid and Phat for the feedback,nice one!!!
Any chance of some more comments?
An yo Phat,a keystyle is when you just sit at your keyboard and just type the rhymes off the top,no written stuff.

peace...#The Dark#

[scarface]

yeah its a lot better than some of the wack shit u read up in here , it was good