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  • 32bars peep and critique

    I just added 12 to my 20 but its still ill as fuck..check

    so underground i'm on the outskirts of hell/
    as long as i'm around chino will never xl//
    i lick more pussies on the mic/
    then an intire womens prison filled with horny as dykes//
    you wanna battle me shit ***** i dare you to try it/
    but your garranteed to fail like oprah winfreys diet//
    after 4 bars i'll have you beggin "no meta stop please"/
    cause i'm so bad i make men with no legs drop to their knees//
    your the definition of wack, fuck that, new attack, rip your spinal cord from your back/
    then step back and laugh as i watch you fold in half//
    hit you so hard in your forehead your grandkids will be brain damaged/
    and every family member after that will pop out wearin an ace bandage//
    fuck that shit bitch i'm out to make you look like a fool/
    ***** i'm so damn hot its impossible ll to be cool//
    lick more shots then when you rub your tounge on the back of your girlfriends neck/
    so smart i got an a+ just takin a mic test//
    ***** you bite more than mike tyson in a room thats "all ears"/
    an' i get into more asses then you do in a house thats all queers//
    commitin battery on your bitch ass till all eight of my nuckles leak acid/
    fuck bein pissed off i'll beat your ass when i'm completely placid//
    you thought this was a friendly battle but instead you got your ass kicked/
    robbed you of all your fans now you get slept on more than a matress//
    fuck sticky fingaz i'm a "madman", rip so far into your ass man/
    your gay lover will come home and find an asshole the size of a trashcan//
    so large he could stick his whole body in it/
    jump around for a good 20 minutes then call ripleys to come and document it//
    you think you got a rhyme that can beat me well then drop that/
    an' i'll bust a rhyme with more fatalities then a game of mortal kombat//
    your as weak with your words as you are between the sheets/
    i got you so scared all you do is stutter and repeat//
    your rhymes aren't just weak they're really fuckin gay/
    keep talkin shit you'll get your wig pushed back like a tupe on a windy day//


  • #2
    metaforik...i seen you on Rapmusic.com....i'm X-Cell there too...i critiqued it there........so check that...

    ONE!
    I Got The Hail Mary Diss...he he he...

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    • #3
      i read it son thanx for the feedback..p-ce

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      • #4
        Good stuff!!

        Some good stuff you be spittin there,good word play and a nice flow!!!
        I really liked the"chino xl" and "winnfreys diet" lines.
        Over all a good freestyle,top stuff!!!

        peace...#The Dark#

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        • #5
          it's good that not all you cats are ignorant to styles other then the eminem/d-12 shock rap style... sure their style is dope as fuck but there are other tight as fuck styles too....

          and i commented on this at rm.com....

          - out.

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          Reppin' Poverty Ass, Forgotten Elementz and D.eath B.efore D.ishonor RIDAHZ...

          All lyrics are Poverty Ass Productions/Hung Phat Publishing...

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