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    yo people, ive made a song over the space of around 2 nites, took bout 3 hours, Im just lookin for some Feedback on it, much appreciated, Peace dawgs

    3027

    The Century of World Destruction begins//
    Churches closed down, believers were committing too many sins//
    Confessions of murder and Rape were on a daily basis/
    Got Priests praying to God for a spiritual oasis//
    Countries greed like an obese mans obsession to gluttony/
    Trust between people used to priceless, now that mind qualities bought with a fee//
    Populations lessen with families dying every week with no hope of a bail/
    Starved civilians of poverty-ridden countries forever trapped in this eternal jail/
    The strong feeling known as love no longer exists/
    Strain and struggle of living has deteriorated this emotion into abyss//
    The fate of the population being decided by dictators like a game of chess/
    Every now and again people stop to think how the world got in this mess/
    Re-united nations Dis-united/
    World Wars declared leaving civilians with no option but to fight in it//
    Stealth Aircrafts are heard ruling the blackened skies/
    Like a head Eagle being followed by its allies//
    Suicide bombers living every last second full of pride/
    Doing their country proud, waiting to die//
    Countries no longer see the need to expand and look to the future/
    Knowing that they’re countries existence can b ended by a detonator button on a computer//
    Politics is no longer heard of, a nations leader is no longer needed/
    Economy and businesses, stopped, ended, depleted//
    Nation’s Dictators becoming glutton with self-greed/
    Obsessed with getting money like addicts to Weed//
    Nothing to wake up to apart from the view of dark misty horizons in the morning/
    People suffering from mind penetrating stress has got them thinkin that they’re life’s steady falling/

    (3027) The century of world destruction prophesised is here
    (3027) The year of the final war is foreseeably clear
    (3027) The hour of fate creates minds filled with fear
    (3027) The minute of terror is agonisingly near

    Up state girls falling pregnant at 11/
    Poverty of Urban Families is not an issue, thug gangsters by 7/
    Cars getting jacked and stripped in broad daylight/
    Dust fills the streets hidden with crime, gangs keeping their gats in site//
    Doctors ending their lives with the lethal injection/
    The only way to give this life a permanent rejection//
    High populations causing mad confusion/
    8 to a house, people wishing that this quality of life was a delusion//
    *****z on streets busting caps at their own fam who got they’re back/
    Lack of trust between gangs comes into place, body after body piled in the morgue in sacks//
    Co-operation between the po-lice and the Drug Lords is non-existent/
    No need for negotiations and fairness, anyone who disagrees can be killed in an instant//
    The fear of no future has got *****z holdin a lighter to their gasoline soaked clothes/
    Blowing up like an inferno, life’s at an all time low//
    The next generation born into a world of struggle/
    Children forced to hustle, just to stay out of trouble//
    People so wrapped up in their own little problems even Remembrance Day is forgotten/
    Po-lice can’t control the body count in battles, the cities biggest wars were caused by 8 year olds who shot them//
    Many things were predicted for the future in which we live/
    Living on the moon, flying cars through intergalactic streets…/
    …People being kinder and always offering to give//
    Reality is, none of this shit has happened, the United Nations had a disagreement/
    Underdeveloped countries give up; developed countries placed no more investment/
    Environmental getaways were soon to be overran with drug gangs and criminals/
    Guns pointed to your head when u trespass knowing that their warnings were subliminal//

    (3027) The century of world destruction prophesised is here
    (3027) The year of the final war is foreseeably clear
    (3027) The hour of fate creates minds filled with fear
    (3027) The minute of terror is agonisingly near

    Visions of the perfect world is just a distant dream to some/
    Other are realists, live life by the gun//
    Year 3027, this global struggle couldn’t of been predicted/
    It was like a bad nightmare a while back, many non-believers contradicted//
    Capital cities newly nicknamed ‘Ghost Towns’/
    Flash anything worth porning? Infra-red lasers targeted, be pre-pared to be shot down//
    Mug and villains stationed all around the roads and streets/
    Behaving like tigers, stealthin’ to attack the meat//
    Cars overturned just coz teenagers were bored of doing the same routine/
    Smoking’ blunts, raping girls…their habits so dirty they ain’t even worth being quarantined//
    Elderly folk living in fear praying for an answer to this pain from the lord above/
    The only thing keeping them alive now which they don’t realise is Love//
    All emotions forgot, it’s the material possessions which matter now/
    This world of corruption which we live, the hope for revival starts with the question ‘How?’
    Revival ain’t a question anymore, just gotta accept that this historical worlds coming to an end/
    Like a terminal injury which is impossible to mend//
    Many head to the monasteries hoping for a higher state of mind solution/
    Sitting in silence, waiting for an answer like it’s gonna appear in some kind of illusion//
    Thug’s that once roamed the crime soaked streets/
    Now condemned to they’re crib, fear’s got them glued to they’re seat//
    Find myself driving round the deserted cities for hours/
    Shits got me phrased, Global warming’s got so bad that they’re ain’t no April Showers//
    It’s like a cauldron of problems all in the mix/
    The realism of the situation turned intelligent people into sadistic lunatics//
    This is the place in which the world has become/
    The realisation stage is setting in…where the fucks my Gun// (Gun Shot)

    (3027) The century of world destruction prophesised is here
    (3027) The year of the final war is foreseeably clear
    (3027) The hour of fate creates minds filled with fear
    (3027) The minute of terror is agonisingly near

    PeAcE yA'Ll


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  • #2
    nice son i got lost in a couple places but its a pretty solid flow, keep it up. p-ce

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    • #3
      dunno! I fell asleep after the first line, and when i woke up i couldnt be bothered too read it!

      verdict-WHACK!

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      • #4
        Top notch.

        Yo,i really liked this peice of work,good vocab and some good intelligent rhymes in there.
        Like Metafork said,the flow did drop in a few places,but flow in text can be totaly different to when your vebally spittin,so it might be ok in audio!!
        Do you spit at any other boards,as i think i recognise your style!!
        Anyway, ill shit,keep droppin!!!

        peace...#The Dark#

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        • #5
          Sup,

          So Solid Player, that's definately some ill shit there....good work...

          ~PeAcE-oUt~

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          • #6
            wheres my gun , lol

            u in fuckin manchester keep shit real would u ,

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            • #7
              lmao , shit i just read the whole thing , its worse then i thought , shit man it would be alright if u was from compton or sumthin , but manchester , lol , and why u sayin ni~~gas when u r white? , shit that was awful , what do u know bout bout gangs and shit , u look like a prepped out rich boy , lol ,

              this is why hip hop is so bad nowadays , because of wack fake thugs like so solid player

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              • #8
                Dam, i can see why it took 3 hours... some good idea's in there, it sorta made me think about the Matrix... thumbs up

                FAO Scarface... Did you even bother to read it?? I'm not dick ridin here, but it was pretty obvious by the name and chorus, that the concept of the whole thing, was the year 3027... not 2001

                and hey, I ain't no Puff Daddy fan.. but what the hell did/does he know about the ghetto? He went to private school and grew up with money.. but it doesn't stop his ass rhyming about it, and makin a mil
                "Get Busy Livin' or Get Busy Dyin'.. Thats God Damn Right"

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                • #9
                  Appreciated

                  yo people, I slightly drunk ere just got in from a goood nite out, yea, thanx for the mostly positive feedbak, I know it dont flow as well as it should in some parts but that can be worked on an shit, Scarface...first of all, looks are deceiving, and secondly, Im in no way a racist person, ive got black mates so they tend to call me ***** likewise I do them...no I aint in any gangsta gangs, but thats the point, its all about predictions, thanx to the people who thought it was good and a big fuck you to the people who just skimmed thru it, I would of appreciated a run down scarface and tell me which parts were shit or what not, anyway, laterz!
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                  • #10
                    Thats some Deep shit Player

                    verse 1-some good observations about war-torn world countries

                    verse 2-nice, but dont talk like you know an American ghetto,
                    Crime and Poverty is Universal, but it aint all Black Gangstas where your at.

                    verse 3-the out come, call to war, ultimate realization. Even thoughs sick with world problems eventually get consumed and contribute to it. That some really Deep shit.

                    St8 up tightness
                    this joke : how many hiphoppers does it take to screw in a lightbulb? .................. three, one to screw in the new lightbulb, and two to argue over how much better the old one was.

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                    • #11
                      Yeah man I read it all too... I'm actually surprised I read it all, but on tha real you hit some hsit on tha head man! Like Maximus & others said it was def deep. Keep up tha thoughs... PeaCe

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                      • #12
                        i thought it was very good , but it just had no relevence to your lifestyle,

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                        • #13
                          Thanx for the comment, yeah I admit the second verse isnt my lifestyle at all, but its just predictions like I said, LaTeRz
                          Last edited by So Solid Player; 06-15-2001, 10:18 AM.
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                          • #14
                            fuck knows how long this thread's been open but i cant remember when i was last looking at the freestyle bored so sorry if my comments are really late.

                            anyways, just wanted to say i loved it, and keep coming up with stuff like that cos its really.....good (sorry cant think of a better word to use to describe it with, but u get wot i mean i hope). the ending is the best bit - captures wot everyone feels, a kinda "fuck it i'd better go with the flow" type of thing.
                            if i had a dick i know u'd be riding it

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                            • #15
                              thanx for tha feedbak Milly
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