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    this was one of my freestyles a couple of days ago:

    Addix the only ones to be ill enough to give wallabe's head
    and when you mess with DaLux you know is you whos gunna be dead,
    runnin from lead, and your not the only one to suffer effects,
    have sex, then get up and recover my legs,
    one punch and your down witha broken nose,
    potent foes, and im the one stuck with all the open hoes,
    and we run out of weed so we're all tokin dope,
    its all love in me, thats all my lust erased,
    oh shit, all this weed has just been lased,
    and its not just you, everyone is pussy mate,
    busy date, and ive run out of drink and no money made,
    my lifes way too hectic, better expect it,
    you wrecked it, took my stuff now i got no way to get shit,
    now i left it, the mic that is,
    so i hand it on so others can get to like practice
    im nearly dead coz i have a bad sickness,
    it makes my brain bitter, so just rap with this,
    be my witness, and say it wasnt me,
    who scandalled bill gates with a simple warantee,
    and got him and the world to then have honored me,
    then rottenly, told you that you were a me wannabe,
    theres a lot of me, and its damn hard to miss,
    i didnt really care when i hammered through it,
    it was only your damn house, i was langered stupid,
    wankers do shit to me coz they think im whack,
    they shouldnt, coz im the hottest thing since Em came into rap,
    but im english and im white so they think its not possible,
    when im dead ill be a legend if not, mythodical,
    its logical, when you hear the addix,
    so come to us if need to know how to rap it.

    gimme feedback

    http://dalux.dmusic.com

  • #2
    come on people.
    tell me what you think of my rhymes.
    need that feedback. ta da
    http://dalux.dmusic.com

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    • #3
      alright......... it started pretty tight, especially the 'Sex-Recover my legs', it was funny

      then it just got boring towards the end of the verse, and I fell asleep by the last line
      this joke : how many hiphoppers does it take to screw in a lightbulb? .................. three, one to screw in the new lightbulb, and two to argue over how much better the old one was.

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