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    Yo im kinda down now,straight feeling confused/
    Forever commiting rhymes to this board, for all of you dudes/
    But replies are limited, sometimes non-existant/
    My persistance is wearing out should i change my rhyme?
    For instance/
    If i was nicer to people and dickrode on their threads/
    Dissed the all "dirtys" and kissed up to all of da "heads"/
    Compliment the femcees, even if i didnt feel what they said/
    Tell em they ILLLL, try to proposition them into bed/
    Put pointless comments on posts like "L-O-L" all the time/
    Claim to be better than most, lie bout a life that aint mine/
    I could say i know proof, or lie about D12 encounters/
    Never tell you the truth, never explain myself to my doubters/
    I could try n start a crew so sum others would have my back/
    So they can lie back, to me when i post something thats wack/
    What if i battled? Took people on with my mic/
    But that seems to incite, more plight than what i already write/
    Would i gain respect? If i faced someone tonight?/
    Would all my pain have left, by the end of the fight?/
    What if i gave up emceeing? What if i gave up breathing?
    What if i was dope-as-fuck? You probably still wouldnt see me/
    I was fighting my demons, i came here to release/
    I came here believing, that i could find peace/
    Or just a piece of something, to stop my head from thumping/
    Or stop my heart from jumping,But a month later im fronting/
    And freestyling this verse, so perverse a swear that it hurts/
    Big Pun was the first,but im the 2nd to his "whole body reversed"/
    Yo, no ones iller so dont push me/
    My rhyme so fine, that each line tastes as good as pussy/
    Picture parasites exploded, websites decoded/
    Posted a thread disguised as an admin and watched how you rode-it/
    So now iv adressed what's on mind yo ill leave you alone/
    Will i ever post again? on the real.............I dont even know/
    The only thing worse than the wretched pain in my mouth is the excrement spewing from yours-Stewie Griffen

    ONLY GOD CAN JUDGE ME

    R.I.P ~ Tupac Shakur-my biggest musical inspiration…you are missed everyday

  • #2
    Tight man,

    yeah, know what u mean about people not replyin. Been bustin my head over my 'Woman Trouble' thread. (unintentional rhyme)
    Your rhyme was cool though. Revitalizingly fresh....

    Originall Posted by Illrun
    If i was nicer to people and dickrode on their threads/
    Dissed the all "dirtys" and kissed up to all of da "heads"/

    Yo, no ones iller so dont push me/
    My rhyme so fine, that each line tastes as good as pussy/

    Picture parasites exploded, websites decoded/
    Posted a thread disguised as an admin and watched how you rode-it/
    Will i ever post again? on the real.............I dont even know/... u should

    Laterz
    "Get Busy Livin' or Get Busy Dyin'.. Thats God Damn Right"

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    • #3
      It's great....and with skillz like that you don't need to kiss up!
      The problem is that when I first started writing rhymes here, there was only few of us. So I could get responce to my rhyme (bad or good). These days there's too much people here! And nobody realy wants to take a time to read someone else's rhyme. They only want to put their in.
      /-\narchy.

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      • #4
        Keep Up Da Good Work

        The flow was good , I was feelin' it. Just continue to be yourself, don't let others try to force u to be somethin' ur not. As long as u keep it tru to yourself, the world is yours to accomplish. Keep up da good work, ya got some skills.Until next time Da313Diva says c ya when i c ya.
        You're so poor, I came into your house, dropped a cigarette, and the roaches came out clappin' their hands and stompin' their feet, singing, "Thank the Lord we got heat."

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        • #5
          Take it All Bitch

          I'm gonna beat your ass with a plastered plate
          Just like i did to that bastered Nate
          I spit rhymes at a faster rate
          Now i got somethen for your ass to hate
          I'm E-Mailin you at the wrong web site an misspellin you
          Brake you an put the fear of hell in you
          Just escaped from Bell View
          Stuff a nurse in her purse
          Disbursed just like i put too many words in this verse
          Rappers are a perverted version of birth
          Driven off with a murdered Verch in the back of a church
          When u should of alerted the surgen first
          Your throwen words getting hit by your own verbs
          Leave me alone bitch i get on my own nerves
          If i dont got two balls and a middle finger to throw up
          I'm taken of both shoes an sticken each middle toe up
          BMPBeats

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          • #6
            dats a very kool freestyle illrun!! ill run.... dnt i know u? iz u da one who asked me 4 advice on ur grlfriend?? i think it iz!!
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