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  • BROTHERLY LOVE?!? bout a foght me n my brother had

    i wrote this after me n brother had a really bad fight. lemme know whatcha think. (sorry fo the endin bein a lil borin n soft)

    i've had a really fucked up day
    n to top it off you wanna have a go at me so i can leave this world n be on my way
    of course you started this beef over some stupid reason that is gay
    so now this rhyme will tell you all that i got to say
    i'm psyco n pissed off so fightin with you is the last thing i need
    if i saw you on the street i'd shoot just to see you bleed
    n after your dead i'll steal your wallet n you bag of weed
    yeah that's right i want your lil phoney ass gone
    so lyrikally you'll die by the end of this song
    first you said i pulled a knife out on you
    but if i did i would defininately follow through
    your callin me an ass but the biggest ass hole is you
    at night when your in bed i'll get my fo fo n bust my way through
    i'll be gettin sick from the site of your face while i shoot at you
    n even sicken frum the fat hoes that smile n act cute at you
    brace yourself cuz imma pull the trigga on the count of 3
    cuz believe it or not ur even bitchier than me
    at least i would only say shit if i had a good reason
    but you called my a bitch just to be dissin n teasin
    so killin you would give me great satisfaction n pleasin
    whether it's by shootin ya or pucturin your lungs til you start chokin n weazin
    even if i have to chop you up with a pizza slicer
    your punk ass gone would make my world a whole lot nicer
    i would even kill you in ways only a cannibal would
    just b-cuz i'd do away with you n e way that i could
    if you seen a shadowy figure pointin a riffle at ya you would know you saw me
    but i wouldn't hire n e 1 to do my dirty work for me
    cuz i want all the pleasure of killin ya myself n watchin would just bore me
    i'm just in a fit of rage, i don't want you to die
    i don't wanna forgive you now but i'll try
    love is what i family is sposed to be bout
    not fightin to be heard when you scream n shout
    if we talk i know we can work this shit out
    so come on for once act like your my brother
    who knows maybe we can learn to stand each other
    do it for us, do it for dad, do it for our mother
    you know it breaks her heart to see us fight n do this
    i know together somehow we can form a bond n pull through this
    (damn)

    some feedback would be nice, even if you think it sux.
    ~Shady Grl~
    The Cartel First Lady
    Cartel 4 lyfe n even longa!

    SHOUT OUTZ: Underworld, LL, Nafareus, West Side aka LDM, Pezza, DH88, the rest of tha Cartel, Bigg T, XeroXL, Big Proof n the rest of D12, n all the dirty headz in Fall River!!!

  • #2
    dope...

    i liked dat shady grl it was dope!!!
    "Becks and Guiness, Weed, Pills and nitrus oxide,
    keep me on the bent so i can spit it from the darkside,
    Ever since 2pac died, I've been trying to get shot,
    cos dead mother fuckers albums always go to the top"- Paradime
    T.R.U LYRICAL DOPE MASTER... (THE.REAL.UNTOUCHABLE LYRICAL DOPE MASTER)



    "i'd rather die like a man, than live like a coward"- 2pac

    MUTHA FUCKIN WEST SIDE TILL I DIE!!!

    lyrical dope master (me): a mutha fuckin ghetto kid who drinks 40's, smokes blunts and fucks cunts,
    named lyrically dope cos his momma said that he was dope and so he decided to call him himself tha master of makin lyrically dope rhymes hence tha name "LYRICAL DOPE MASTER" (although lyrical dope master couldn't fit so he just put dopemaster)

    O.K

    "Don't have unprotected sex, take drugs, and be violent............................... leave it to me!"-Eminem

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    • #3
      oh yeah...

      can u post shit on dirty12 or is it just me?
      "Becks and Guiness, Weed, Pills and nitrus oxide,
      keep me on the bent so i can spit it from the darkside,
      Ever since 2pac died, I've been trying to get shot,
      cos dead mother fuckers albums always go to the top"- Paradime
      T.R.U LYRICAL DOPE MASTER... (THE.REAL.UNTOUCHABLE LYRICAL DOPE MASTER)



      "i'd rather die like a man, than live like a coward"- 2pac

      MUTHA FUCKIN WEST SIDE TILL I DIE!!!

      lyrical dope master (me): a mutha fuckin ghetto kid who drinks 40's, smokes blunts and fucks cunts,
      named lyrically dope cos his momma said that he was dope and so he decided to call him himself tha master of makin lyrically dope rhymes hence tha name "LYRICAL DOPE MASTER" (although lyrical dope master couldn't fit so he just put dopemaster)

      O.K

      "Don't have unprotected sex, take drugs, and be violent............................... leave it to me!"-Eminem

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      • #4
        one mo thing...

        i just wanna put this picture up...
        "Becks and Guiness, Weed, Pills and nitrus oxide,
        keep me on the bent so i can spit it from the darkside,
        Ever since 2pac died, I've been trying to get shot,
        cos dead mother fuckers albums always go to the top"- Paradime
        T.R.U LYRICAL DOPE MASTER... (THE.REAL.UNTOUCHABLE LYRICAL DOPE MASTER)



        "i'd rather die like a man, than live like a coward"- 2pac

        MUTHA FUCKIN WEST SIDE TILL I DIE!!!

        lyrical dope master (me): a mutha fuckin ghetto kid who drinks 40's, smokes blunts and fucks cunts,
        named lyrically dope cos his momma said that he was dope and so he decided to call him himself tha master of makin lyrically dope rhymes hence tha name "LYRICAL DOPE MASTER" (although lyrical dope master couldn't fit so he just put dopemaster)

        O.K

        "Don't have unprotected sex, take drugs, and be violent............................... leave it to me!"-Eminem

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        • #5
          thanx, yeah i can post things on dirty12, y you can't?
          ~Shady Grl~
          The Cartel First Lady
          Cartel 4 lyfe n even longa!

          SHOUT OUTZ: Underworld, LL, Nafareus, West Side aka LDM, Pezza, DH88, the rest of tha Cartel, Bigg T, XeroXL, Big Proof n the rest of D12, n all the dirty headz in Fall River!!!

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          • #6
            like the image!
            ~Shady Grl~
            The Cartel First Lady
            Cartel 4 lyfe n even longa!

            SHOUT OUTZ: Underworld, LL, Nafareus, West Side aka LDM, Pezza, DH88, the rest of tha Cartel, Bigg T, XeroXL, Big Proof n the rest of D12, n all the dirty headz in Fall River!!!

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            • #7
              i can post on dirty12 now...

              i can post now, but now i cant get on eminem.com and its pissin me off can anyone else get on?.
              "Becks and Guiness, Weed, Pills and nitrus oxide,
              keep me on the bent so i can spit it from the darkside,
              Ever since 2pac died, I've been trying to get shot,
              cos dead mother fuckers albums always go to the top"- Paradime
              T.R.U LYRICAL DOPE MASTER... (THE.REAL.UNTOUCHABLE LYRICAL DOPE MASTER)



              "i'd rather die like a man, than live like a coward"- 2pac

              MUTHA FUCKIN WEST SIDE TILL I DIE!!!

              lyrical dope master (me): a mutha fuckin ghetto kid who drinks 40's, smokes blunts and fucks cunts,
              named lyrically dope cos his momma said that he was dope and so he decided to call him himself tha master of makin lyrically dope rhymes hence tha name "LYRICAL DOPE MASTER" (although lyrical dope master couldn't fit so he just put dopemaster)

              O.K

              "Don't have unprotected sex, take drugs, and be violent............................... leave it to me!"-Eminem

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              • #8
                uppin fo mo feedback!!!

                it would be nice if some 1 besides dopemaster could let me know what they think.
                ~Shady Grl~
                The Cartel First Lady
                Cartel 4 lyfe n even longa!

                SHOUT OUTZ: Underworld, LL, Nafareus, West Side aka LDM, Pezza, DH88, the rest of tha Cartel, Bigg T, XeroXL, Big Proof n the rest of D12, n all the dirty headz in Fall River!!!

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                • #9
                  ha, nice, nice....

                  keeep it up...

                  pz
                  playformore.org , One Year Millionaire Blog

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                  • #10
                    yo

                    nice rhymez :-()
                    lost to

                    siko tik

                    no wins


                    RIP
                    tupac(tupac shakur)
                    biggie smalls(christopher wallace)
                    big pun (christopher rios)
                    Aaliyah(aaliyah haughton)
                    and for the hell a it dale earnhardt


                    p-h- izzle

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                    • #11
                      Respone

                      Your flow about your brother was a bit harsh, but I understand that in the heat of the moment a person can get really pissed. At least at the end u were willing to let bygons be bygons (sp error) I thouht ur rhyme was kinda tight. Until next Da313Diva says keep da peace.
                      You're so poor, I came into your house, dropped a cigarette, and the roaches came out clappin' their hands and stompin' their feet, singing, "Thank the Lord we got heat."

                      http://www.cartoondollzhome.homestea...s/couple04.gif
                      REV & DA313DIVA sittin' in a tree, k-i-s-s-i-n-g, first came love, then came marriage, then came the baby in the baby carriage

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                      • #12
                        thanx!!

                        thanx fo the feedback. my brother is still sayin shit bout me but i let it slide cuz i don't wanna end up hatin on him. i didn't realize how much anger i had towards him until after i wrote this rhyme. but me n him made up (sorta) so it's all good.

                        uppin fo mo feedback!!!
                        ~Shady Grl~
                        The Cartel First Lady
                        Cartel 4 lyfe n even longa!

                        SHOUT OUTZ: Underworld, LL, Nafareus, West Side aka LDM, Pezza, DH88, the rest of tha Cartel, Bigg T, XeroXL, Big Proof n the rest of D12, n all the dirty headz in Fall River!!!

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                        • #13
                          more replies would be nice

                          uppin fo more feedback!!!
                          ~Shady Grl~
                          The Cartel First Lady
                          Cartel 4 lyfe n even longa!

                          SHOUT OUTZ: Underworld, LL, Nafareus, West Side aka LDM, Pezza, DH88, the rest of tha Cartel, Bigg T, XeroXL, Big Proof n the rest of D12, n all the dirty headz in Fall River!!!

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                          • #14
                            ShadyGrl, u knoe i think it rules, girl. u should battle a lil'. get a bit more recognition. jess a suggestion. peace tha hekk out, girl.
                            Lyrikally Lost aka Fidel Kastrator


                            http://invince.8m.net/dei2.gif

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                            • #15
                              aight LL, i might battle.
                              ~Shady Grl~
                              The Cartel First Lady
                              Cartel 4 lyfe n even longa!

                              SHOUT OUTZ: Underworld, LL, Nafareus, West Side aka LDM, Pezza, DH88, the rest of tha Cartel, Bigg T, XeroXL, Big Proof n the rest of D12, n all the dirty headz in Fall River!!!

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