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    Dj Phat your nursery rhymes/
    aint good enough for the poor man's dime/
    equivilent to the daily allowence/
    cos im rappin here for a bunch of cowards/
    who desperate to here my lyrical flow/
    then rip my style and make the dough/
    a ching ching/
    blingin bling/
    motherfuckers you flyin cos my shit blew you away/
    and my raps get better every day/
    14 ya nah! and my freestyle shit/
    was iller than the ghetto kid's/
    who lived in the hood/
    grew up in the hood/
    and STILL in the hood cos his lyrics weren't good/
    cos yall dont desreve the riches/
    yall dont deserve the bitches/
    if your freestyle bites your tounge when you spit/
    then how you gonna hate on Hailie Jade's shit?/
    Im so ill i vomit after every verse/
    but the balance is fair cos your shit gets worse/
    damn brother you aint ill your sick/
    you just jockin dirty dozens dick/
    to steel yo'self a battle rap/
    then come up here and hit me back/

    M to the M-and-M C/
    that is me, im a lyrical G/
    say my name/
    say my name swiftly/
    hai-ai-li-ie/
    battle family/
    (bling bling)

    HOLD HOLD UP! i aint done/
    just came on here to have some fun/
    diss your ass and hurt your feelings/
    your punishment for lyrically stealing/
    why you wanna bite vanilla's style?/
    yeah he was heavy for a while/
    but now look who he's fuckin with/
    whisper my name you dumb ass div/
    and i'll break you into a million pieces/
    with your uncles aunties and your nieces/
    amongst other things/
    your base-line stinks/
    like father Jack after fourty winks/
    damn boy i think i may throw up/
    cos i never figured you'd show up/
    at the battle station just last week/
    i was laughing at your ass you geek/
    laughing AT you not WITH you/
    that weren't spit...that shit was spew/
    it was entertainment boy, straight up/
    you grab the mic and yo voice caved up/
    damn my boy...you make me laugh/
    but kill your rhymes before i barf/
    you like a gun without a bullet/
    cos you shoot yo mouth before bein asked spit/

    M to the M-and-M C/
    that is me, im a lyrical G/
    say my name/
    say my name swiftly/
    hai-ai-li-ie/
    battle family/
    (bling bling)

    Your moma sucks your grand sons dick/
    while you flash it out to hit on a chick/
    show em the money/
    to get you a honey/
    cos you know my ass is sweeter than your face/
    and your mouth be runnin all over the place/
    about the bitch you fucked cos you playin games/
    morning comes you forget their names/
    and im telling you its them chains and rings/
    that got you big ol' pussy tings/
    cos any bitch in der right mind/
    wouldn't step near your hefty behind/
    i aint bein rude im spittin the truth/
    cos the only attraction is your gold tooth/
    those diamonds, saphires and jems/
    mean more than the love you offer them/
    cos your hair be afro like michael Jackson/
    in them old days when you still drove hacksons/
    and your face be mash up like your behind/
    your eyes and nose are out of line/
    your ears will settle down im hoping/
    cos you look like a truck comin down the road..with BOTH doors open/
    your ryhmes were stolen off of noddy/
    damn you so fat...you went to school and sat next to EEEEVVVVEEERRRYYYbody!/

    M to the M-and-M C/
    that is me, im a lyrical G/
    say my name/
    say my name swiftly/
    hai-ai-li-ie/
    battle family/
    (bling bling)

    http://www.freezone.co.uk/vivabsurd/warning.gif

    You 'bout to
    Journey into the mind
    Of a psychopath killer
    Blood spiller
    Mentality much iller
    Than you could ever imagine
    In your wildest dreams
    You feel his pain
    In his silent screams

  • #2
    It was nearly ok, you need to use better vocab i fink, and make you rhymes a bit more complex, LaTeRz
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    • #3
      Bobby vs Hailie (Round 1) Read and Respond!

      Aiyo Aiyo, Hailie jade think she got it made/Me and my crew gonna rip and still get paid/thinkin she the ish/wit a battle rap that she jus spit/if thats how u usually rhyme/girl u need to quit!/that rhyme was a swing and a miss/read sumthin by me/its a guranteed diss/so run and tell daddy/that u got ripped by richard pryor's caddy/and u can cry ur eyes out/say he was killin me softly/and mommy be cryin sadly/imma a hazard to ur daily livin/i leave crews shook and shiverin/im so hot that after every bar i spit/i need a towel/to wipe the sweat i drip/now hailie jade when u read this flow/remember what i say/that chorus u spit/i thought was kinda gay/im sorry if i offend u/in any little way/but i had to get it off my chest/jus sumthin to say/u wanna be seen/wit ya big pink font/im the playa wit the lyrics/that u really want/i can spit my raps/ wit no chorus/we would never be together/ur a libra/imma taurus/may 10 is the day that i was conceived/im so tight/i steal the air u breathe/i dont usually cuss/but that last rhymeu wrote/that shit really sucked/in conclusion everyone/its all in fun/ sumone get on this thread and let me know who WON!!??!!

      ~Holla~
      Bobby Kuffs reppin tha K.I.D.s
      Reppin tha K.I.D.s
      [Kriminalz In Disguize]

      Bobby_Kuffs aka Konvict
      Supa_Nova aka Mumbles
      Oldskool aka Anonymous Phophet
      KW_Gaskinz aka Scooter

      *Holla!*
      *Dont Blow My Buzz*
      *Bring Our Boys*

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      • #4
        that was shit!
        http://www.freezone.co.uk/vivabsurd/warning.gif

        You 'bout to
        Journey into the mind
        Of a psychopath killer
        Blood spiller
        Mentality much iller
        Than you could ever imagine
        In your wildest dreams
        You feel his pain
        In his silent screams

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        • #5
          Hahaha

          Hailiejade123, ur gettin ripped left, right and centre.... just give it up ... enough with that big-ass-pink font as well

          Good rhymes in there Kuffs... liked the Libra/Taurus thing too

          laterz

          Someone check out my rhymes on the battle board from hailiejades thread... it read somethin like 'All you muthafuckers who think ur good enough....' I can't remeber, anyways, she got ripped

          Last edited by Ian; 06-15-2001, 12:30 PM.
          "Get Busy Livin' or Get Busy Dyin'.. Thats God Damn Right"

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          • #6
            yea thats weak usin big pink fonts!! go home!

            detroit!

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