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    give me some feedback on dis rhyme.

    yo, your face is soft like jello
    I kicked your ass and you was angry
    I was mello
    last week me and my fellow
    we was sittin on the corner sippin on Jack daniels
    shot for shot
    up rolled a cop, said drop the booze and put your hands up
    so I set it down and stood up
    pulled out my glock
    locked, and shot
    the piggy stopped on the spot
    fell to the ground covered in blood like a clot
    bounced outta there before the five could give chace
    asked for help from my lady of grace
    Mary Jane, the bitch fucks up my brain
    you know what I mean
    HOW, you don't know me
    but that's alright though
    'cause I don't know your bitch ass either
    so what tha dizzle
    you frontin like you'z a bizzle
    I'll crack you in tha head wit the blunt end of a chissle
    then flip to the sharp
    It's best if you don't even start
    rip you apart like jaws
    that killa fuckin' shark
    It didn't really look real
    but imagine how it would feel.


    TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK
    -=§BLuNt²ºº¹§=-

  • #2
    lol that was tight, dude. keep on rhymin'.
    Lyrikally Lost aka Fidel Kastrator


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    • #3
      Aiyo

      Aiyo dawg,
      dat was a tight rhyme! Keep it goin!~
      What u know,i'll stole ur show!

      Now watch my peformance explode!

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      • #4
        i liked it. that was a tight rhyme. it was really good.
        ~Shady Grl~
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        Cartel 4 lyfe n even longa!

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