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  • 21 bar bore freestyle-Critiques

    *****s holdin' me something I said//
    Just cause I shot some ***** wit lead//
    No fingerprints;No Evidence//
    Through all the banks I have clearence//
    Havin' more money than everlast//
    Beat them down:Was easy as glass//
    I'm Suge Knight and Shaggy:It wasn't me//
    And possibly,through my oddesey,You see how odd i can be//
    Strippers and Hoes,Won in poker,Look how you fold//
    Keepin' life on the fast lane//
    Have no time to relax or strain//
    Stay on my feet;Brush the teeth//
    Always on the rampage//
    See this is only the first stage//
    Taking this worldwide to the ural nation//
    Just stand back and feel the sensation//
    I have the proclamation//
    Heres the unofficial statement//
    Everything is your creation//
    Thats the truth the revelation//
    Don't wait for the anticipation//
    Hip-Hop is the sound of the free spirit
    So fake *****s stop fucking it


    AIM:FinalFlavaRap
    Email:[email protected]

  • #2
    tight rhyme

    i liked dat shit........i was feelin your style ya know


    holla
    Battle Record

    ~8-4~

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    • #3
      it was kinda simple in tha beginning, as a matter of fact, it was real simple, but u got better towards tha end. keep on writin'!
      Lyrikally Lost aka Fidel Kastrator


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