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  • BEEF........ everyone check this and rate it!

    this aint finished yet but tell what ya think of it so far...

    Look who your fuckin wit its me the attacker,
    the gangsta mutha fucka and the quarterback sacker,
    the crazy ass kid on the corner wit a mac,
    fire 6 clips in your body and your back,
    think you can fuck wit me cos i'm asthmatic,
    i'll whip yo ass wit words fuck being dramatic,
    you can try kill me wit a glock and automatic,
    but i'll bust yo brain wit noise cos i'm so damn erratic,
    don't fuck wit me cos i'mma addicted plane crasher,
    convicted car bomber and mercedies tyre slasher...

    and thats it! so far anyway!
    "Becks and Guiness, Weed, Pills and nitrus oxide,
    keep me on the bent so i can spit it from the darkside,
    Ever since 2pac died, I've been trying to get shot,
    cos dead mother fuckers albums always go to the top"- Paradime
    T.R.U LYRICAL DOPE MASTER... (THE.REAL.UNTOUCHABLE LYRICAL DOPE MASTER)



    "i'd rather die like a man, than live like a coward"- 2pac

    MUTHA FUCKIN WEST SIDE TILL I DIE!!!

    lyrical dope master (me): a mutha fuckin ghetto kid who drinks 40's, smokes blunts and fucks cunts,
    named lyrically dope cos his momma said that he was dope and so he decided to call him himself tha master of makin lyrically dope rhymes hence tha name "LYRICAL DOPE MASTER" (although lyrical dope master couldn't fit so he just put dopemaster)

    O.K

    "Don't have unprotected sex, take drugs, and be violent............................... leave it to me!"-Eminem

  • #2
    feedback...

    can i have sum feedback please!
    "Becks and Guiness, Weed, Pills and nitrus oxide,
    keep me on the bent so i can spit it from the darkside,
    Ever since 2pac died, I've been trying to get shot,
    cos dead mother fuckers albums always go to the top"- Paradime
    T.R.U LYRICAL DOPE MASTER... (THE.REAL.UNTOUCHABLE LYRICAL DOPE MASTER)



    "i'd rather die like a man, than live like a coward"- 2pac

    MUTHA FUCKIN WEST SIDE TILL I DIE!!!

    lyrical dope master (me): a mutha fuckin ghetto kid who drinks 40's, smokes blunts and fucks cunts,
    named lyrically dope cos his momma said that he was dope and so he decided to call him himself tha master of makin lyrically dope rhymes hence tha name "LYRICAL DOPE MASTER" (although lyrical dope master couldn't fit so he just put dopemaster)

    O.K

    "Don't have unprotected sex, take drugs, and be violent............................... leave it to me!"-Eminem

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    • #3
      aiyoo

      Ite thats pretty good...not saying this directly to you but i think we need to make a forum for rhymes and not just freestyles bc half these rhymes are freestyles they stop and think about what your writing..thanks for not postin dis as a freestlye... i like it so far keep going!
      What u know,i'll stole ur show!

      Now watch my peformance explode!

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      • #4
        yeah this is good so far... finish it and then post the rest. oh, and yeh i agree, these boards are no good 4 freestylin cos u have plenty of time to stop & think!
        ~*shadysista*~

        "You don't
        Wanna fuck with Shady (cos what?)
        Cos Shady
        Will fuckin' kill you"

        ~ Eminem


        http://cartoondollzhome.homestead.co...ravegurl21.gif

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        • #5
          freestyle...

          my bad it wern't ment to be a freestyle, and i'll let yo know when its finished!
          "Becks and Guiness, Weed, Pills and nitrus oxide,
          keep me on the bent so i can spit it from the darkside,
          Ever since 2pac died, I've been trying to get shot,
          cos dead mother fuckers albums always go to the top"- Paradime
          T.R.U LYRICAL DOPE MASTER... (THE.REAL.UNTOUCHABLE LYRICAL DOPE MASTER)



          "i'd rather die like a man, than live like a coward"- 2pac

          MUTHA FUCKIN WEST SIDE TILL I DIE!!!

          lyrical dope master (me): a mutha fuckin ghetto kid who drinks 40's, smokes blunts and fucks cunts,
          named lyrically dope cos his momma said that he was dope and so he decided to call him himself tha master of makin lyrically dope rhymes hence tha name "LYRICAL DOPE MASTER" (although lyrical dope master couldn't fit so he just put dopemaster)

          O.K

          "Don't have unprotected sex, take drugs, and be violent............................... leave it to me!"-Eminem

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          • #6
            feedback...

            uppin fo mo!
            "Becks and Guiness, Weed, Pills and nitrus oxide,
            keep me on the bent so i can spit it from the darkside,
            Ever since 2pac died, I've been trying to get shot,
            cos dead mother fuckers albums always go to the top"- Paradime
            T.R.U LYRICAL DOPE MASTER... (THE.REAL.UNTOUCHABLE LYRICAL DOPE MASTER)



            "i'd rather die like a man, than live like a coward"- 2pac

            MUTHA FUCKIN WEST SIDE TILL I DIE!!!

            lyrical dope master (me): a mutha fuckin ghetto kid who drinks 40's, smokes blunts and fucks cunts,
            named lyrically dope cos his momma said that he was dope and so he decided to call him himself tha master of makin lyrically dope rhymes hence tha name "LYRICAL DOPE MASTER" (although lyrical dope master couldn't fit so he just put dopemaster)

            O.K

            "Don't have unprotected sex, take drugs, and be violent............................... leave it to me!"-Eminem

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            • #7
              dopemaster

              i gotta rost i just gota
              how the hell you gonna call that a freestyle if u write it do its not called a freestyle its called a wack rap cuz all you talk is crap an thats the truth tho' c'mon dawg u gotta do better then that if u wanna b called a freestyler an plus
              plus in order to freestyle it gotta come from the top like this...........
              Yo i can rhyme done son
              begun spun a gun all in one
              now that a ill flow
              that shit was the ish an if you cats dont know what ish means then you needa jus quit tryin' to flow from the get go



              im the dirty kid on the ones an twos
              so keep it double e zey
              BMPBeats

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              • #8
                dude, thats hot yo!!>...
                its pretty good, waiting till it be finished!!!
                i cant really rhyme for shit ( look on battle board!!)(hehehe)but i like it!

                keep it up!


                peace
                The lyrically lost!!

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                • #9
                  dexta...

                  thanks dats apreciated and o that other person was dat a diss?!?
                  "Becks and Guiness, Weed, Pills and nitrus oxide,
                  keep me on the bent so i can spit it from the darkside,
                  Ever since 2pac died, I've been trying to get shot,
                  cos dead mother fuckers albums always go to the top"- Paradime
                  T.R.U LYRICAL DOPE MASTER... (THE.REAL.UNTOUCHABLE LYRICAL DOPE MASTER)



                  "i'd rather die like a man, than live like a coward"- 2pac

                  MUTHA FUCKIN WEST SIDE TILL I DIE!!!

                  lyrical dope master (me): a mutha fuckin ghetto kid who drinks 40's, smokes blunts and fucks cunts,
                  named lyrically dope cos his momma said that he was dope and so he decided to call him himself tha master of makin lyrically dope rhymes hence tha name "LYRICAL DOPE MASTER" (although lyrical dope master couldn't fit so he just put dopemaster)

                  O.K

                  "Don't have unprotected sex, take drugs, and be violent............................... leave it to me!"-Eminem

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                  • #10
                    aye fakemaster

                    ya i guess u can call it a diss if ur bitch ass want it to be aiight


                    this is the dirty kid on the ones an twos
                    so keep it double e zey
                    BMPBeats

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                    • #11
                      Don't hate the messenger...but...you're whack.



                      I'm a stuck, starving artist.
                      Vincent Van Going nowhere.
                      Sold my silver souls to the devil.
                      Hoping he'll throw up a gold pair.
                      Mostly concerned... with my own interests... as per usual.
                      Foolishly pursuing the fruit of what's removable.
                      Into the full view.
                      Do you see me as suitable...
                      to prove to the world that my beautiful dream is simply doable?



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                      • #12
                        eyeku or whatever...

                        dont take this the wrong way an i aint a regular user so i aint beefin but your rhyme sucked!
                        "Becks and Guiness, Weed, Pills and nitrus oxide,
                        keep me on the bent so i can spit it from the darkside,
                        Ever since 2pac died, I've been trying to get shot,
                        cos dead mother fuckers albums always go to the top"- Paradime
                        T.R.U LYRICAL DOPE MASTER... (THE.REAL.UNTOUCHABLE LYRICAL DOPE MASTER)



                        "i'd rather die like a man, than live like a coward"- 2pac

                        MUTHA FUCKIN WEST SIDE TILL I DIE!!!

                        lyrical dope master (me): a mutha fuckin ghetto kid who drinks 40's, smokes blunts and fucks cunts,
                        named lyrically dope cos his momma said that he was dope and so he decided to call him himself tha master of makin lyrically dope rhymes hence tha name "LYRICAL DOPE MASTER" (although lyrical dope master couldn't fit so he just put dopemaster)

                        O.K

                        "Don't have unprotected sex, take drugs, and be violent............................... leave it to me!"-Eminem

                        Comment


                        • #13
                          yo i like tha rhyme alot, and i'm not anything special myself but ya i've seen ya do betta, on a scale of 1 to 10, ehhh... 8, good but it could be betta, return tha favour now and peep str8 from tha heart, peace dawg

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                          • #14
                            ayo

                            Read your first two bars and thought to myself this kid is weak, Soundin loud but ain't saying nuthin you must be Bleek,your soul you need to seek,your pinnacle you reached,now stop fuckin up the game like black jeans and bleach,sorry about your style but it didn't suffer at all, it died quickly at the end of it's fall, impact was weak, du to being hollow like 3 in the morning in a pro-ject hall,did you find that steez in a stall, or was you shopping and just picked up the first thing you saw in the mall, immaculately concepted you were I can tell, you remind of another kid I just took to hell, like him you frail, got a crack in your frame like the Liberty bell,you may have one or more disfunctional cells, and I suggest you calm down before I lock you up and I know you aint got enough for bail, so run along get a notepad and practice your rhymes, and maybe someday your style will be heard, when not talking like a mime, If you chose not to Ill be forced to come get you, everything you stand for will be gone and trust me, no one will miss you, your moms won't even need a tissue, gone like the puff of smoke after the wind blew, nothing pretty when I come I'll stop your breath and watch your skin turn blue, there's nothing you can do, but relax just stay in your place and hold off on taking you............................
                            Battle Record

                            ~8-4~

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                            • #15
                              cad...

                              where the fuck u been man after u said everyone on dirty12 was an asshole i wanted to beef wit u boy but i guess its cool now? thanks for the feedback and is u still in the cartel?!?!?!?!?!?!
                              "Becks and Guiness, Weed, Pills and nitrus oxide,
                              keep me on the bent so i can spit it from the darkside,
                              Ever since 2pac died, I've been trying to get shot,
                              cos dead mother fuckers albums always go to the top"- Paradime
                              T.R.U LYRICAL DOPE MASTER... (THE.REAL.UNTOUCHABLE LYRICAL DOPE MASTER)



                              "i'd rather die like a man, than live like a coward"- 2pac

                              MUTHA FUCKIN WEST SIDE TILL I DIE!!!

                              lyrical dope master (me): a mutha fuckin ghetto kid who drinks 40's, smokes blunts and fucks cunts,
                              named lyrically dope cos his momma said that he was dope and so he decided to call him himself tha master of makin lyrically dope rhymes hence tha name "LYRICAL DOPE MASTER" (although lyrical dope master couldn't fit so he just put dopemaster)

                              O.K

                              "Don't have unprotected sex, take drugs, and be violent............................... leave it to me!"-Eminem

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