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    A lotta people - think that im weak/
    The type to never compete with the peeps who speak heat/
    On these boards and sound so sweet,i admit im incomplete/
    But please try to see, im just trying to be me/
    I was conceived innocently in a close family/
    Poor but sure that we'd get thru eventually/
    Financially suffering but still strong emotionally/
    My pops was real close to me, he would hold me at night/
    Give me stories of a bright future, we used to be tight/
    He rose-tinted my sight, fed me fantasies of a life/
    A house hold of gold, floors marble virginal white/
    Doors lef unlocked thru the night, never a reason to cry/
    A far cry from the knife, kept all night at my beside/
    Cuz even though we were broke, the words he spoke gave me hope/
    In his arms i was secure, thought he'd never let go/
    I guess that just goes to show, how easily people switch/
    Now i see him as a bitch, who filled my head with idealistic bullshit/
    Then he skips,leaves his kids wondering where he is/
    Worn out faces of kids, hearts torn out splitting their wrists/
    Nightmares exist,no bliss in this reality twist/
    Never kissed, cold lips cant resist perverted pigs/
    My sistas couldnt resist dick, knocked up in their teens/
    Ripped jeans in the eighties replaced with ripped dreams/
    Sometimes it seemed, like we'd be better off dead/
    Many a time have i fled, or held the gun to my head/
    Or cut myself and then bled, sit and stare at the red fluid/
    Demons living in my visions, they all tell me to do it/
    But dont confuse it, cuz i aint gonna die tonight/
    I want revenge at my end - Me n pops gonna fight!/

    Its depressing/
    Writing bout depression but its all i have/
    Spitting twisted theories of an adolesence gone mad/
    Ten years have passed, but it still makes me sad/
    To think af all the shit i been thru becuz of my dad/

    Its depressing
    Writing bout this pain in my brain/
    Knowing no matter what i say it is always the same/
    Maybe im insane, but im just stuck in the game/
    Even though i want out i just keep on playing/


    All feedback is appreciated.
    The only thing worse than the wretched pain in my mouth is the excrement spewing from yours-Stewie Griffen

    ONLY GOD CAN JUDGE ME

    R.I.P ~ Tupac Shakur-my biggest musical inspiration…you are missed everyday

  • #2
    nice shit man

    hey man shit was tight keep it up i like it alot
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    • #3
      its good.
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      • #4
        OH YEAH....NOW I REMEMBER WHY I NEVER POST ON THE FREESTYLE FORUM ANYMORE
        The only thing worse than the wretched pain in my mouth is the excrement spewing from yours-Stewie Griffen

        ONLY GOD CAN JUDGE ME

        R.I.P ~ Tupac Shakur-my biggest musical inspiration…you are missed everyday

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        • #5
          props for the verse ILL. nice shit
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          is at ya gay peepshow when they jackin off."

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          but if ya wanna be black I could shit on your face."

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          • #6
            Yo Illrun.. u not u got my count dude...

            Tight... u kept up the plot whilst maintaining the flow and keeping the rhyme. I liked it.. touchin... I like stuff like that from MCs.. show's all your dimensions. I like how its like a story too.... lot of imagry in there... like this part
            My sistas couldnt resist dick, knocked up in their teens/
            Ripped jeans in the eighties replaced with ripped dreams/
            Sounds like and ya dad got ya probs... I've always thought writin stuff down was the best way to vent ur feelings.. and if u can do it in a rhyme, all the better

            Holla
            "Get Busy Livin' or Get Busy Dyin'.. Thats God Damn Right"

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            • #7
              see, now was that so hard???

              yo but on the real much love to:

              xeroxl/MrsShady/FuGu187/DJ Phat

              i appreciate the feedback

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              The only thing worse than the wretched pain in my mouth is the excrement spewing from yours-Stewie Griffen

              ONLY GOD CAN JUDGE ME

              R.I.P ~ Tupac Shakur-my biggest musical inspiration…you are missed everyday

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