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    **Alright tell me what you fellas think of this. This is my second freestyle that I have done. Its kind of simple, but it has sort of a deep meaning I suppose, Peace*



    For real
    Am I the only one here tired of these fucking fake ass mother fuckers?
    You know the people
    The fuckers who dont got the balls to say the shit to your face
    But will gladly take a shot at you when you aint around


    Im sick and tired of always havin to watch my back
    Cause I got no idea what will be the next attack
    keep talkin that shit.... your gonna get smacked
    right in the crack of your faggot ass.
    Every day, its “he says, she says”
    Well Im just sayin..... listen to my thesis
    Nobody out there is out to please ya
    There out there for just one reason
    If ya got a car, you better be believin
    They’ll be in the passenger seat of your brand new lincoln
    For once I’d just like a friend for no reason
    a friend who will stop ya when youve been drinkin
    a friend who will calm ya down when your freakin
    someone whos there when your at your worst
    when you look like dirt and your too poor for church
    when you got nothin better than to drink and curse
    they’ll actually stick around if your not fred durst

    Anyways, back to the subject at hand
    When I hear this shit I wanna move to a peaceful land
    Find some real friends and start up a new fam
    But I know reality just wont let it stand
    I want another chance..... but I cant start again
    This damn life has me danglin from a strand

    It doesnt matter about your age, color, or race
    If you talk shit to me your gonna maced
    straight in the face
    I think I see one face but I see another
    Monday and Tuesday your as tight as my brother
    4 days later were hatin eachother
    Only because you had to go and utter
    to those other peeps about my mother
    Its shit like this that I can’t decipher


    **Its not finished yet, and I dunno.... do you guys think its good enough to even bother finishing and getting a hook for? Let me know**





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    SOMEBODY TELL ME WHAT THEY THINK OF IT PLEASE

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    • #3
      thats some good shit there. The choice of lyrics is good in the fact that it flows pretty well, but the problem i found is your using the same kinds of lyrics other have in the past in sections.

      "Im sick and tired of always havin to watch my back
      Cause I got no idea what will be the next attack
      keep talkin that shit.... your gonna get smacked
      right in the crack of your faggot ass. "

      this bit here for example... trusting no one and getting in fights and talking about faggots... its been done in the past loads of times. some of the lyrics about what u look for in a friend are really thought provoking though, and i think thats a good thing to include in a rap. i like it.
      All in all, i think that u got a pretty good thing going, with variation on the rhyming pattern and a good idea to base it on, and the fact u rapping about the same kinda thing others have done doesnt really matter much if u can word it in a new way, which i thought u did pretty well. Keep it up and post the rest of it when u finish!

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