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    Yo, here I go... this is my first post here, so ima spit some shit, tell me what you think. Im not takin much time on it.




    Man your more dramatic then a fuckin bitch,
    You probably support abercrombie and fitch,
    So die snitch, die I said DIE,
    Cuz I get high on my rhymes all the time,
    I find new ways to destroy your words,
    When it hits it takes out Cars, buildings and birds,
    and im sure you heard the same shit before,
    But if you say it again you'll be laying on my floor,
    Now your afaird to open your door
    Just be prepared what your in store for,
    I sold my soul, but I need more, im hardcore,
    No im not talkin bout porn,
    I was better at rapping before you were born,
    Now your torn, from your elbows to your legs,
    When i drink, I drink from the kegs,
    You stink so bad you smell like eggs,
    Wait, hold up im not done yet,
    Let me tell you what your gonna get,
    Your gonna get a bomb threat,
    and its coming in your mail,
    Hell, I dunno but you just failed,
    Well, I know im great no need to applaud,
    God, you guys jaws are open in awe,
    So goodbye cuz you face the fact that my game is to strong,
    Its just becuase you fucking came on to strong,
    I put fame on this song, but the blames on your mom,
    I had to tell that bitch to keep her clothes on...



    PeaCe... tell me what you think I wrote it pretty fast.



    ~Kube~

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    aight well i thought it was ok. idk if i can do better, but i feel like replyin bak, but just a warnin- i havent written in like a month, and im sick lol... so here goes nothin

    man i feel like ive heard ur shit 100 times, its just plain and dull/ i attack harder than a sin stuck in ur soul/ i aint a regular girl, im original/ dont make me uncomfortable or i might get physical/ dont believe mah words, ask the victims ive made disabled/ when mah words hit, they r fatal/ more deadly than Cancer or AIDS/ and just like 'em, there's no cure for mah words, just victims dat gotta pay/ mah spits stay fresh, while urs fades away/ u lose ur touch faster than a dyin elder loses hope/ when mah mouth opens next to a mic, if ur mah opponent, i hope u can cope/ cuz every MC ive versed have backed down b4 they even spit/ u just a pussy too scared to let ur emotions out, while i spit for real shit/

    aight well can u please rate mine. i no ive down better, but i dont feel good rite now, and im tryin to get bak into writin, so idk how great dat was. but rate it neway.
    *One female MC dat aint afraid to take on the boys*
    battlin vs. me u got the chance of survival of a criminal bein put thru guillotine/ parental advisory, shit mah raps r just obsene/
    ~*Infinite*~

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