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  • jus a ryme,

    Call it crazy,Mabe youll hate me stallin or take me “in the future”
    Possibly dating patiently waitin “in the future”
    I might jus stun u i might have won u
    In the future I might be aways frum u ,
    Constintly cravin what could be takin “in the future”
    Take these “future” memories, n lock it up,, that’s how ...ill make u see
    N make it cemestry n stamp it right now if u jus let it be
    Seal it with a “future” kiss lets make history
    dought about what could turn out to be this friendship we makin
    for goodness sakin, what if u waken , n see that im taken
    right now im not playin
    U might be the one who plays n tears us apart boo
    and I might be the one who stays and cares about you
    so take some time out and learn about
    what coiuld turn out
    so she cries out , no more lies
    but it jus might work out somehow

  • #2
    the contect seems to work well, but I was gettin lost cuz of how u structured
    the rhyme. I cant find the flow in it, like I can't see a beat fittin the rhyme
    but thats just me. I know how u just hear a beat in ur head and type
    unaware of how other people will be able to see it, but try and work
    on it so that it's easier to understand
    I LOVE MY *BabyTigger*



    - Tigg
    aka: NewPorT

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    • #3
      thankz

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