off the top.

[hi-fi]

you faggits is bitch talking, i've seen the shit posted up on the internet and you faggits is bitch walking, you jelouse that my careers sparked and yous can't find the start, it's sort of hard for me to act tight especialy cause i'm white, but get respect cause I might, bring day to your night, tuffest in a fight, if you turn for a second i'll plug your wife, not living a thug life, clothes sorta tight, this is a freestyle and i'll never quit, smoke two pounds of you faggit in a splif, if you try to hit me your'll miss, i'm to quick moving in stealth, check your life line one bar of health, mines bullet proof i'm hosting the NEXT battle on national t.v. like proof, I'm telling the truth step in the booth your lose you tooth straight from the root, no doctor can help ya when i pass you the mic and it's so hot it will melt ya.

[dErTy kEvin]

im not feelin it, but its a good start, keep working on it
4/10

[hi-fi]

Thanks man i just started. i am glad to hear a responce.

[hi-fi]

2nd Try

2nd chance listen close take a glance;
it'll make you more cancerouse than Lance;
You should hear me spit live better than internet vibes;
fuck this typing i'm used to fighting;
one on one with a mic, not internet hype;
it's not how you write, it's how you flow it tight;
but i get up and dust off the first 4 out of 10 loss;
not Tony but close to a mob boss;
approaching this game from different angels;
the poem skills make your toung dangel;
I'm coming from a manger some say I'm the light;
hi-fi close to danger; kid will put you to night;
unscripted but tight, 1am typing fight;
when you black and blue missing a mic;
thats a Tyson Fight

[da Leprechaun]

st8

[B-WhiSpeRz]

Pretty good man. your shits gettin' iller. juss keep on rhyming man. your off to a good start.

[hi-fi]

Lets Go

i'll battle the Leprechaun, gagstar from dusk till dawn/
the fag came to view didn't spit cause he'd know he lose/
if you real want people to chose state you views on fightin/
i'll come back with force of lightnin, terrifing and frightnin/
your styles bitting, mines a genious when i'm writing/
plus i got more game than arcades, more game than jordan played/
way past drastic, i'll smash track/
when i stab back through like elastics/
this basters playing rap in the past tent/
but i'll pass by him so fast leave his brain assasined/