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    ok i think im gettin better, this freestyle is about this punk ass at my school....

    yo diss mutha fucka jeff
    bout to take his last breath
    cuz im gonna bring this pusse to his mutha fuckin death
    the bitch is always talkin shit behin my back
    keep talkin bitch and im gonna be on attack
    man matter of fact
    ill come up right behind you
    take my pepper spray out and straight up blind you
    then ill beat yo ass to the mutha fuckin ground
    man i told you before, i aint fuckin around
    now you screamin for help, in a whinin sound
    but no ones near us, so your no where to be found
    so quit runnin around tellin people bad things about me
    you know what, fuck this bitch, yo im out g

    give me advice plz
    April 11th, 2006 - Proof that the good die young

  • #2
    lol ok the plot is weak, but thats all i could think of to ryhme, and btw i did give it to him...and i am not a pusse

    rate the freestyle not the story plz!!!
    Last edited by DirtyHead Kevin; 02-23-2004, 08:26 PM.
    April 11th, 2006 - Proof that the good die young

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      • #4
        that sucks man and ur a fuckin ******
        "ScoInTheMobro"
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        • #5
          Originally posted by DirtyHead Kevin
          ok i think im gettin better, this freestyle is about this punk ass at my school....

          yo diss mutha fucka jeff
          bout to take his last breath
          cuz im gonna bring this pusse to his mutha fuckin death
          the bitch is always talkin shit behin my back
          keep talkin bitch and im gonna be on attack
          man matter of fact
          ill come up right behind you
          take my pepper spray out and straight up blind you
          then ill beat yo ass to the mutha fuckin ground
          man i told you before, i aint fuckin around
          now you screamin for help, in a whinin sound
          but no ones near us, so your no where to be found
          so quit runnin around tellin people bad things about me
          you know what, fuck this bitch, yo im out g

          give me advice plz
          it was good i cant say it was great though you rhyming was a little week on a scale from 1-10 with 10 being the best id give you a 5
          fuck and the world i dont care
          www.eminemall.info
          my site

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