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  • need some feedback!!!!!!!!!!

    i wrote this shit against this dude in a battle but he never showed up.

    so just let me know what you think, leave some feedback
    im new at this shit!


    damm you lost yourself?your fucken dumb//
    more retarted than roofus the bum//(roofus from Bum Fights)
    going up against me is like a hex,that you cannot beat//
    you battling MTX,who spits nothing but heat//
    I spit more fire, than a flame thrower//
    You couldn't win if you luck was higher, than a four leaf clover//
    My name should be eminence, cause im above all//(eminence means above all)
    like Yao Ming in the presence,of midgets 3 feet tall//
    now before this continues it course,lets stop and take a poll//
    how many of you think ima rip him up worse,than his boyfiend did his asshole//
    damm lost yourself that must take its toll//
    you probably have it as wide as a cereal bowl//
    What ashame, a unaymous vote//
    this was stragiht from the brain, aint even shit i wrote//
    FUCK BEING IN A CREW

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