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    in my mind its like a purgatory mixed w/ hell and heaven, when you see me on a mic you betta duck fo' you get severed;
    i'll leave ya gaspin' askin' me juss how tha fuck i do it, till you see tha glock up in my pocket cocked and bout to shoot it;
    you dealin w/ a man who stands w/ no feelin', bullets goin through like sand and then tha holes is cealin';
    make you touch tha' cealin', w/ this gat im pealin', then im realin in tha dough w/ a deal im ceelin';
    like a mouse in tha game im juss searchin' for tha cheese, and tha lyrics that im spitten's like inflamed disease;
    slapped up and clapped, got yo' minds at ease, while you sleepin in tha dirt restin peacefully;
    i put an end to faggets w/ the flows i rap, peelin a gat, minsey maggets in this game collapse;
    i'm ghostly in this bitch when a blunt i toke, cuz my lyrics hit like spirits up in flames and smoke.......

  • #2
    new to tha game......... i need sum feedback

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    • #3
      Not bad man, I cant really judge on your flow and such cuz I havenít see your other stuff, but not bad. Lyrics are fine and flow seems fine. Ok im bored, Imma write this verse and then Im goin to sleep

      I aint sentimental, doctors tryin to explain my mental/
      Not writin with pencils, scribbling with kitchen utencils/
      Im tryin to stay uncreative, fuck bein suspenseful/
      Fuck I donít even wanna rap, hear borrow my raps for rentals/
      I spit without given a shit- fuck an intense flow/
      I try to rhyme bad, tryin to fuck up my credentials/
      So I flip through my notebook pages, my brain races/
      Takin paces, makin faces, fuck shoes, I walk with just laces/
      Fuck commercial rap, I donít wanna sit hear and start naming em/
      Mothafuckas suck more dick then a touchy E usin Jenna Jameson/
      My obligations is to create imitations for intimidations/
      Fuck bein real, im itchin for someone to tell me what fake is/
      Half the MCs out claimed they real but that aint a fact/
      Matter of a fact, cuz the fact of the matter, theyre image and not rap/
      Thatís why Im tryin to stay avoidin droppin about myself as a person/
      Ill be a faze for 10 days and then Ill be dropped and be worthless/
      Im not holdin back, im fightin with wrath through these curses/
      But I cant, I did this to myself, fuckin low esteem claim surges/
      Im listenin to some real shit now, Pac, Big L, Rakim just to name a few/
      I got more on my list, but fuck it, Im tired- its half plus 10 past 2/
      My visual is blurry, makin up stories, my memory is erasin/
      I feel ashamed, this is lame, wait, what was I just explainin?/
      I donít fuckin care, im like viagra, my dick is wrinkled but I stay raisin/
      My eyes are squinted im so exhausted, please god donít mistake me for asian/
      Yea I aint a racist, sorry if my hatred is tasteless/
      But hey fuck it, I love this, cuz shit I donít wanna argue, im debateless/
      I got issues, miscues, rippin up bitches slits like paper thin tissues/
      Just gimme a mic or a pen, lemme begin, I donít need fists to hit you/

      Uh ok, im done, im tired, Ive been listenin to too much Big L for one day, hit me back with your opinions, peace
      The Big 4
      http://youtu.be/NMMUh37BWEE The Truth
      http://youtu.be/PT_j38VUAuE Rondo
      http://youtu.be/yhTKSdWRC0I KG
      http://youtu.be/3VhwzKGkvjg Ray

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      • #4
        that shit was fuckin ill.......... you off da hook

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        • #5
          you need 2 lay that shit on a track..........lol

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          • #6
            Thanks man, yea im startin to work on my EP, i dont know when it should be done but yea, its in the works, thanks man, u keep it up too
            The Big 4
            http://youtu.be/NMMUh37BWEE The Truth
            http://youtu.be/PT_j38VUAuE Rondo
            http://youtu.be/yhTKSdWRC0I KG
            http://youtu.be/3VhwzKGkvjg Ray

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