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    Yo, Im new to this site so imma just spit somethin real quick and I want some feedback, thanks.

    Seein closed caskets or ashes of my bastards/
    Did nothin with their lives, continuous non action/
    I see homies backin when i start spat rappin/
    Contact is inevitable, everyone will feel my wrath and passion/
    Flowin more then oceans, explodin at an omen/
    I got the potion to move crowds in fast and slow motion/
    I dont bust slugs, but still i come with my thugs/
    Gimme a nudge, is it a buzz cuz i dont want it without drugs/
    Fitz's spits outwits 100% of the hip hop percentage/
    Smackin bitches like a kick box workin tensions/
    Matter of a fact, fuck makin songs, i wanna stay feudin/
    Creatin music, ill abuse it, nuisance who stays workin humid/
    Many say they offer shit when they become a rap singer/
    I got shit to offer, cept my ass to kiss and middle fingers/
    Speakin, leakin, speedin raps as a bad demon/
    Leadin terror and horror as Im slashed bleedin/
    Some say its hokus pokus, but ill judge when i post this notice/
    What do i needa focus? rather be spittin but fuck it i wrote it/
    Im into hip hop, cant stop, cant have my lips locked/
    I wear bummy clothes, no hoes, and never flash a wrist watch/
    Some say this new found talent is all new luck/
    I dont know why this game seduced me, cuz i dont give a fuck/
    I dont know how many bars, I scarred, did i go to far?/
    Im hidin in my cella fella, talkin to myself "im an underground star"/
    I apologize for bein hostile guys, and for wreckin words/
    Im just tryin to get love from the thugs on this message board/

    Ok thats a quick little thing, hit me up with what ya think, peace
    The Big 4
    http://youtu.be/NMMUh37BWEE The Truth
    http://youtu.be/PT_j38VUAuE Rondo
    http://youtu.be/yhTKSdWRC0I KG
    http://youtu.be/3VhwzKGkvjg Ray

  • #2
    that was ill............good shit....(alot better than me.....lol)

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    • #3
      sick verse keep it up
      FUCK BEING IN A CREW

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      • #4
        alright verse but can you spit correctly is the question? keep it up not bad at all

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        • #5
          nice verse
          Love, live life, proceed, progress

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          • #6
            i guess it was good but you sorta got off the point i think maybe your tryin to hard or sumthin but other then that your pritty good
            fuck and the world i dont care
            www.eminemall.info
            my site

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            • #7
              naw..... that shit was sick....... fuck being on point, its a freestyle!

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              • #8
                (no disrespect to katey shadey)

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                • #9
                  that was tight
                  "This is paradise, I'm tellin' ya. This town like a great big pussy jus' waitin' to get fucked."

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                  • #10
                    Thanks guys, yea to Katey Shadey, there wasnt really a point to it, i was just writin consistently, ok guys thanks, i appreciate it peace
                    The Big 4
                    http://youtu.be/NMMUh37BWEE The Truth
                    http://youtu.be/PT_j38VUAuE Rondo
                    http://youtu.be/yhTKSdWRC0I KG
                    http://youtu.be/3VhwzKGkvjg Ray

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                    • #11
                      it's cool....
                      7Digit
                      UNTOUCHABLE LYRICISTZ

                      You The Flyest Guy Walkin' That's Only Because I'm Seated

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                      • #12
                        new2 the board rate plz

                        Fake ass's impersonates Shady's adimins
                        Then Immitates Aftermath slash usein atkins for backup//
                        So back up ...This crew is fake

                        (- So whos Fake ^^ )

                        Ask Me We knew this shit ..in the 1st place
                        So step to plate, Let's play a Game called: " TesT'a'Fait"
                        your friend lost so let's Procrastinate,
                        Sorry *****'s but 'Today's' ( 2days) from now ain'tcha'day/

                        I'm guess you mixin this releationship was a mistake
                        I put more heart into this 'Bitch' then I Do ..sellin 'Whey'
                        So please don't mind while I make 'Whey' <--(way)
                        'Attack' then Slash'n'Add' thee 'Detach' for you today,
                        then tax you for makin me go outta my way/

                        (- DrugDeal^^ )

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                        • #13
                          That wuz pretty ill...keep it up
                          _____=+| 30-4, 25KO |+=_____

                          *23 Straight KO Wins* Still Waiten for someone to match that

                          * ReTiReD *

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                          • #14
                            yo i got tired of reading half way down but judging by these replys that shit was ill

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                            • #15
                              ^Finnaly ur first non-gay thing uve said
                              _____=+| 30-4, 25KO |+=_____

                              *23 Straight KO Wins* Still Waiten for someone to match that

                              * ReTiReD *

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