Battle Grounds

[hi-fi]

any cat wanna battle, come to the grounds/
if you really hot shit, lets hear you lay it down/
cause i do it for fun, but i still rid with a gun/
aint going out like God's son, bitch start to run/
flows just begun, when it gets heated up/
your spontanious conbust, full thrust/
with the throdle, been rhyming since yous a toddler/
styles harder than vince carter crashing the net/
or maybe Kenya Martin from the New Jersey Nets/
i'm a vet, at war to protect/
the world, rhyming for cheques/
and paper show respect/
yo a bitch didn't make the band/

[Ripper21]

Nice verse i liked the concept heh,nice pieace man the rhymes were good to .

[Ridiculous_Rick]

Nothin' speacial you need to be more witty everything in that whole verse was pretty dry. Just some advice for you. Keep writing man and I'm sure you'll pop out some doper stuff.


My 2 Cents,
Ridiculous