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    theres so much violence in the world today
    I walk down the block and
    watch guns spray
    what a brutal display of this story to portray
    but what can I say?
    it's true I must pray
    for my existance cuz
    cats come and aim from a distance
    when they miss they become more persistent
    get assistance so it becomes more consistent
    you can run but you can't hide
    fools in a ride reside worldwide
    comin to take ya pride and
    make you subside but you a bona fide G
    on a crime spree won't stop when these fools disagree with me
    I'm a young MC and I'ma free like a banshee
    screamin at the top of my lungs
    speakin in tongues cuz I've run short on funds
    like my boy ReRun
    so "Whats Happenin'?" I'm adaptin'
    redefinin' and rappin'
    the silver linin' is crackin'
    fuck it I'm straight jackin'
    anyone who said they was backin' me
    then it seems they decieved when they attackin me
    I was naive to believe these fools who acheived
    gainin my trust
    I wore my heart on my sleeve till these cats turned to muts
    bite at me so I make 'em dust
    now I must adjust the fucks that I hang wit
    cuz I'm "too legit to quit" so I omit the dishonest
    consider it a promise u can look in my optics
    in this synopsis
    within my abyss
    it consists of many things that may seem amiss
    but I reminisce and write
    so y'all get this
    Last edited by NewPorT; 02-28-2004, 01:54 AM.
    I LOVE MY *BabyTigger*



    - Tigg
    aka: NewPorT

  • #2
    very nice sht bro... your getting better. keep up the good work.

    "They look up to me, tell me because I'm living proof.
    If life was fair, then I swear, we'd have a Living Proof."
    -Chamillionaire-

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    • #3
      Man this is really tight. Keep postin.
      "Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before." - Poe

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      • #4
        very nice shit bro u got der
        PlaYbOy

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        • #5
          appareciate the feedback y'all
          thanx
          I LOVE MY *BabyTigger*



          - Tigg
          aka: NewPorT

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          • #6
            that was ill man. nice flow and i like the whole concept in general. i thought the line

            "I wore my heart on my sleeve till these cats turned to muts." was real clever and nice. keep it up.


            Ridiculous
            7Digit
            UNTOUCHABLE LYRICISTZ

            You The Flyest Guy Walkin' That's Only Because I'm Seated

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            • #7
              yeah I;m tryin to work more lines like that into my rhymes
              gives them more impact and establishes a persons intelligence
              I LOVE MY *BabyTigger*



              - Tigg
              aka: NewPorT

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              • #8
                nice to now u can take time out ur busy schedule
                to hate on me. Yet I never seen u bust a rhyme or show
                anything more than u lame hater skills. I'm sure in ur daily
                life u gots dick suckin skills but thats anotha story.
                keep hatin fool
                I LOVE MY *BabyTigger*



                - Tigg
                aka: NewPorT

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                • #9
                  Originally posted by Tyrants Dad
                  ^ Fuck was that?ur WACK and ur mom sucked my dick
                  hahahaha fuck the haters! hey newport nice shit the vocab was good and the flow was decent keep doin ur thing,listen go spit some shit in my Cypher thread all of u go do that..peace out
                  Originally posted by SpeechLess
                  With ma shit you RATE, TAPED n RAPED on the first DATE/
                  If you fall u BREAK lika PLATE, Cuz lika baloon u poped now u gonna DEFLATE/
                  ^ Wackess of the month

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                  • #10
                    up
                    I LOVE MY *BabyTigger*



                    - Tigg
                    aka: NewPorT

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                    • #11
                      yo this was pretty nice man even tho lines were short (which isnt a bad thing depending on the way you rap) it was very good keep it up.. check mine out if you have the time its called cold truth

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                      • #12
                        hott shit newport.......i liked it
                        Realm

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