Not a freestyle but a one of my full songs (Yo some hot shit rate this holla pt.5)

[dropdimes18]

i aint playing so put them toys away/i aint kool with ya pussy so get the fuck up out this face/say summin i dont like and get blasted away/with a lyrical level up with snoop dogg eminem and dr.dre/ok/look buck at me right and get the fuck bucked ill ask u to suck my dick but'll prob. get sucked so just leave and save yo fucking like/i know its not worth it but u ove it jesus christ/y do u love it its worthless/y u think u gonna succed damn u hopeless/u can put that on my like put it on my gravestone/u can drive stakes thru my heart or pull bullets to my bones/nobody betta test me/cause i dont wanna get messy/fore i grab u by ur testees/and fucking rip em off/kill ur fucking moms like i was jack the rippers son/look ima pro ur ass a beginner/my flows come phat, urs come slimmer/look i just spit some shit like slick rick did in the 80s and now i spit/so throw a fit/i really wont give a shit bitch/so go on and suck a clit/yo wack ass rhymes aint equipt/jaws drop ears open when i spit/u just a patient might as well call me docter/while m young and spitting u steady in yo rocker/im hard you softer/an originator/u bobber/u bitch fucking bum while u tryin to spit rhymes im making yo babys moms cum/what u mad? now u want beef?/ ill knock yo ass out have people asking "Got Some Teeth"/man cant you see my rhymes is at a higher level/u lower/im greater/u a dying dog i came to save ya/ the rap savior/cause all yall gotta do is give me time/ima be a rap monster/fuck young hood, ima be the rap fankestien/

so thats it.

[Symptom]

that good.. i give it a 8 out of 10.

[dropdimes18]

yo thanx for the props

[dropdimes18]

yo some feedback

[silk]

now thats some grade A shit man i give that 10 outta 10 dawg

[pimpettegyrl]

umm can u please put it in a bar format so i could actually read it properly