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    Aiight fellows,me again =D
    __________[ Verse 1 ]
    This night,I know,I'm gonna let dat go,
    I aint gonna care,I aint gonna think is it fare,
    if u can play with me,I can play with u,
    this is my warning see? Now I'm gonna hurt u ,too.
    Did u really thought dat this is over?
    It aint,sircle just moves more closer,
    and it wants to tore,it wants u for sure,
    games have begun,no rules are written,
    just give ur best shot,let it all out,
    feel dat somebody just bitten,ur talent
    and called out ur name,hit them back
    with lyrics mad,angry,lame.
    Fucking male wanted revenge,he wished dat I wud die.
    Well boy they did me a levenge!
    What more do ya hope,get outta here,now bye.
    I didn't died,but I know u wanted me to be dead,
    coz I pulled ur heart out,hah just throw dat over ya head,
    coz it's worth zero,yea right like u're my hero,
    I stand alone,I'm da true Ice Queen on throne.
    This starts to annoy,u were just one boy,
    who though dat u own me,
    but only one who controles me is free.
    Free from this world's chains,free from it's ordinary name.
    I'm my own master,got it little bastard??
    U prolly got the picture what's going on at nights,
    people drinking,partying,just hanging without sight.
    Girl is walking... with tears roaping troath,
    she's sick of trying to prove dat nonsenss,
    dat aint gonna happen dat one person
    can win this pointless.
    U judge me only for dat I'm writing,
    and now I'm tired of fighting.
    I'm bad they talk,I'm evil thay say,
    I'm Devil inside ,I'm castaway
    who has to die.


    Chorus:
    U're just another fucking male,
    who thinks dat I'm for sale.
    U wanna own my body and mind,
    and wanna ware me like a neckless
    by ur side.


    [ Verse 2 ]
    Well I got some news - fucking wuuwha,
    bette' lay down in front of ma' shoes,
    coz u aint gonna meet a girl like me,
    ever again,other bitches will blend,
    to ya hands,when ya stand,when they sucking ya dick,
    man get over it,get some help,u're sick!!
    Who were I for u? Just some thing dat is
    for push and pull?For fun,FOR SALE??
    Haa but my limit just got full.
    I'm gonna rip u down,I'm gonna make u look
    like a real clown,aint u shamed to
    make offers with ur girlfriends body?
    What did ya wanted,ME to call YA daddy?!?!
    It's like Bush'es chess with Iraq,man ur brains
    are even longer than giraffe,it's da USA government
    I'm pulling at my gun,coz one of estonians got killed
    there,u bloodwanting freak,if u cud see how
    mother cries out her dead son!!
    Like it is,everything is on marcet to buy
    to sell,do anybody even care dat there's da biggest chance to fell?!
    Specially policy,only to get more power,
    don't waste ur time on pacify,
    coz all we hear is "dat's top-classified",
    if u're rich enough,or bitch so though,
    then marcet is ur home,world's moving to be like
    the old Rome.
    We'll sell our soles and mind with
    dat crap,with corruption,
    yea,u gotta admite,all nations are
    ment to die in pollution.
    So I'm living in dat too and with
    all dat shit I'm gonna pay back good,
    bette' fear me now, dude!


    1x Chorus


    [Verse 3 ]
    If I'll come,I won't leave,eye to eye,
    c'mon prove ur power to me!!
    U can sell my name,my face,u can introduce
    me like a real fame,.
    Now when I got no rights,no soul,
    nomore the leading part in ur life,dat role,
    were shit anyway,coz every day I got calls,
    dat ur man promised u to me and deadline is
    about to fall.
    Now the babe who were for sale,
    hates ALL THA FUCKING HORNEY MALES!!!
    U can't never see me,speak me,heal me,
    yea ever won't get to know real me,
    coz sick of dat bullshit,I believed in love,
    I did, I wanted to believe,why fuck
    u had to choose me?!I waited,I dreamed,
    it was my fantasy coming true,
    how nice dat seemed!
    Like Michael Jackson who's accused
    of misusing little kids,media has sold
    him as a biggest criminal of all,they're so badley
    waiting him to fall,
    who said dat R Kelly had sex with teenagers?
    do ya have evidences?ouh how big catastrophe,MAGER!
    On marcet we are,dear sis'es and bro's,
    some 13 years old kidz are offering themselves
    from door to door.
    But I beated u for good,I hunted u
    around all neighborhood,and now again
    I'm alone,but week hope is floating,
    soon going to vanish from our ozone.
    Man...I've got one avowal to do -
    I was really planning to KILL U!!!

    2x Chorus
    - Miss Independent -

  • #2
    so its for sale
    q

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    • #3
      No-no =D just the title of da song is "For Sale" =)
      - Miss Independent -

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      • #4
        Lame...
        Watch as the room rocks
        Mentally moonwalk
        Mixed media slang
        Banging in your boom box verbal violence
        Lyrical stylist
        In a time when rock hip hop rhymes are childish
        You cant tempt me with rhymes that are empty
        Rapping to a beat doesnt make you an emcee
        With your lack of skill and facility
        Youre killing me
        And a DJ in the group just for credibility

        //\BATTLE RECORD//\ 4-0

        \\/DEFEATED//\
        Noxshus (KO)
        Kg Tha Kid (KO)
        Master-Minded (KO)
        hallaatatlanta (KO)

        STILL REPN THE BATTLE-AXE LABEL

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        • #5
          Wot the fuck?! Well I'll say dat wasn't lame! I watch how everybody rap around here and it seems all good,but not me? Make some things more clear for wud ya?!
          - Miss Independent -

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          • #6
            Im not gonna be a dick and tell ya the shit was lame......ill give ya might thoughts....

            I think for a beginner, it was a good step, aside from ur last verse i think ya did, you did it in bars, thats good shit, better structured, easy to read. But....heres another thing.....

            Did u really thought dat this is over?
            It aint,sircle just moves more closer,
            and it wants to tore,it wants u for sure
            (this line needs to rhyme with sure, it sounds better rather than switchin the rhyme plot up)

            That only works if ya hear the audio, but im guessin that it wouldnt sound that great the way it is structured like that, just my guess. Anyways, also, expand your vocab, dont be afraid of goin into deeper words and shit, take some chances. all in all, it was an ok attempt, good shit to work off of, just keep workin at it. peace
            The Big 4
            http://youtu.be/NMMUh37BWEE The Truth
            http://youtu.be/PT_j38VUAuE Rondo
            http://youtu.be/yhTKSdWRC0I KG
            http://youtu.be/3VhwzKGkvjg Ray

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            • #7
              o its the title
              q

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              • #8
                *coughs* i thought this was ok but you just need to make the length of the lines bit longer
                and make more rhymes but it kinda of flowed nice but use more vocab and yeah i this drop
                keep writing
                REpresting the CrAzY MinD3D MCs

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                • #9
                  ya the whole shit about this thing beeing for sale was lame....
                  Watch as the room rocks
                  Mentally moonwalk
                  Mixed media slang
                  Banging in your boom box verbal violence
                  Lyrical stylist
                  In a time when rock hip hop rhymes are childish
                  You cant tempt me with rhymes that are empty
                  Rapping to a beat doesnt make you an emcee
                  With your lack of skill and facility
                  Youre killing me
                  And a DJ in the group just for credibility

                  //\BATTLE RECORD//\ 4-0

                  \\/DEFEATED//\
                  Noxshus (KO)
                  Kg Tha Kid (KO)
                  Master-Minded (KO)
                  hallaatatlanta (KO)

                  STILL REPN THE BATTLE-AXE LABEL

                  Comment


                  • #10
                    rather then saying lame why dont u give her advices
                    REpresting the CrAzY MinD3D MCs

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                    • #11
                      Really...some advices wud make me happy,okay I got some already...I'll try again then =) Won't give up yet
                      - Miss Independent -

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                      • #12
                        Ayo...Gurl i wasnt tryin to bash u...NEVer Give it up keep spittin...
                        lata B
                        Watch as the room rocks
                        Mentally moonwalk
                        Mixed media slang
                        Banging in your boom box verbal violence
                        Lyrical stylist
                        In a time when rock hip hop rhymes are childish
                        You cant tempt me with rhymes that are empty
                        Rapping to a beat doesnt make you an emcee
                        With your lack of skill and facility
                        Youre killing me
                        And a DJ in the group just for credibility

                        //\BATTLE RECORD//\ 4-0

                        \\/DEFEATED//\
                        Noxshus (KO)
                        Kg Tha Kid (KO)
                        Master-Minded (KO)
                        hallaatatlanta (KO)

                        STILL REPN THE BATTLE-AXE LABEL

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                        • #13
                          yeah good girl look on the bright side of life ok i'm high today
                          and yeah u will improve eventually :D
                          REpresting the CrAzY MinD3D MCs

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