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  • My 16 Lines Shine Fine

    ayo...listen up
    i got no flow of fity and i havent been shot 9 times//
    i just supply ur minds with deep ryhmes with these 16 lines that shine fine//
    Now im constantly spittin to beats n instrumentals//
    using this paper with my skills as my stencil to write another verse wit my pencil//
    ima veteran in this game... of cyphers n freestyles//
    stacks of verses in piles wit an adrenaline street style//
    its just me... E-x-s to the T //
    repn the burbs of new hollywood van-city//
    Now i live an everyday life of work n play//
    designing eventual success for the next day//
    ima MC with much respect for learners//
    im also flowin words to the next record deal earners//
    so if u wanna feature me in ur next song holla//
    ill be here waiting with my sagged pants and a flipped up colla//
    rip ready or not here i come //
    u wanna battle bitch im here... come get some//

    Watch as the room rocks
    Mentally moonwalk
    Mixed media slang
    Banging in your boom box verbal violence
    Lyrical stylist
    In a time when rock hip hop rhymes are childish
    You canít tempt me with rhymes that are empty
    Rapping to a beat doesnít make you an emcee
    With your lack of skill and facility
    Youíre killing me
    And a DJ in the group just for credibility

    //\BATTLE RECORD//\ 4-0

    \\/DEFEATED//\
    Noxshus (KO)
    Kg Tha Kid (KO)
    Master-Minded (KO)
    hallaatatlanta (KO)

    STILL REPN THE BATTLE-AXE LABEL

  • #2
    not that bad
    "This is paradise, I'm tellin' ya. This town like a great big pussy jus' waitin' to get fucked."

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    • #3
      what he said not that bad but not that great aswell
      if flowed nicely but make it longer or cant u write long ones??
      keep improving and use more big vocabs and i think
      multis will be helpful aswell
      keep it up and keep writing
      REpresting the CrAzY MinD3D MCs

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      • #4
        16 lines
        15 minds
        14 kinds
        13 blinds in a house wit no windows
        12 14 was kids of endo
        11 goes wit seven
        10 is the evil under heaven
        9 is the sign of aries
        8 hates unkind babies
        7 is 21 wit march
        6 carries my stopd heart
        5 was the strugle of makaveli
        4 was the hunger from within my belly
        3 connected it all
        2 protected the fall
        1 left em silly wit a gapin jaw

        hi im psycho...
        "All i need is one mic.. ~All i need is one blunt, one page, one pen an one prayer, tell ALLAH to forgive me for one sin, as a matter of fact maybe more then one, i look back at all the hatred against me, FUKK ALL OF EM...~"

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