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    ayo...hope yall fellin this
    im self designed,forced to incline my ryhmes//
    as i climb eventual success to the hightimes//
    still im just an MC rippin n spittin//
    droppin straight freestyles still neva prewritten//
    now none of yall can stop me im the next in the hotseat//
    gotta bigger ryhme book than a priming foxy//
    common now try to knock me// ill blast u like a zit hit Lyrikal oxy//......
    Now still i preserve a beefless cast and crew//
    u wanna hot sellin collab im the man for you//
    beats bass n snare always sounding new//
    throwin combos punchlines n multis into a brand new stew//
    man who knew...that i would just strive for the pride//
    to ride with the music and the mic by my side//
    so lets turn the tide...to when pac got shot//
    when he died it was a world wide MC shock//
    he could rock the talk n walk the walk//
    still packin his glock while bustin the lock//
    for todays youth spittin the truth....//
    the truth about the ghetto//
    cause the world is an image like a bitch in steletto's//.....
    still society dresses our problems up like a doll//
    like the 2 towers when they were set ready to fall//
    will we be ready tommo or will we be steady n all//
    as we try to stand tall neva ready to crawl....//
    Now again its just me E-x-s to the T//
    ready to drop a demo for an upcoming cd//
    Watch as the room rocks
    Mentally moonwalk
    Mixed media slang
    Banging in your boom box verbal violence
    Lyrical stylist
    In a time when rock hip hop rhymes are childish
    You canít tempt me with rhymes that are empty
    Rapping to a beat doesnít make you an emcee
    With your lack of skill and facility
    Youíre killing me
    And a DJ in the group just for credibility

    //\BATTLE RECORD//\ 4-0

    \\/DEFEATED//\
    Noxshus (KO)
    Kg Tha Kid (KO)
    Master-Minded (KO)
    hallaatatlanta (KO)

    STILL REPN THE BATTLE-AXE LABEL

  • #2
    yo yo, quite good, but some of the flow were broken, well i don't know maybe u can rap it different from the way i thought.
    goood spit.

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    • #3
      ya i think that came out diff with the way my rap flow was...thanx for the feed....
      Watch as the room rocks
      Mentally moonwalk
      Mixed media slang
      Banging in your boom box verbal violence
      Lyrical stylist
      In a time when rock hip hop rhymes are childish
      You canít tempt me with rhymes that are empty
      Rapping to a beat doesnít make you an emcee
      With your lack of skill and facility
      Youíre killing me
      And a DJ in the group just for credibility

      //\BATTLE RECORD//\ 4-0

      \\/DEFEATED//\
      Noxshus (KO)
      Kg Tha Kid (KO)
      Master-Minded (KO)
      hallaatatlanta (KO)

      STILL REPN THE BATTLE-AXE LABEL

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      • #4
        still uppin for feedback!
        Watch as the room rocks
        Mentally moonwalk
        Mixed media slang
        Banging in your boom box verbal violence
        Lyrical stylist
        In a time when rock hip hop rhymes are childish
        You canít tempt me with rhymes that are empty
        Rapping to a beat doesnít make you an emcee
        With your lack of skill and facility
        Youíre killing me
        And a DJ in the group just for credibility

        //\BATTLE RECORD//\ 4-0

        \\/DEFEATED//\
        Noxshus (KO)
        Kg Tha Kid (KO)
        Master-Minded (KO)
        hallaatatlanta (KO)

        STILL REPN THE BATTLE-AXE LABEL

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