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  • Some thing i did *feed bak pleez*

    I did this a while ago but i tried doing it to the beat of 2000 B.C. Just tell me what you think.

    Break ya clavical and catapult canon balls clogging lungs until you cant even breathe//
    A cannibal who eats flesh from chest and breast who fights //
    I inflict sties to afflict your eyes and fix them right//
    Then singe your whole body while I verbally cauterize //
    Discard your guise it aint hard to find the meaning between the lines//
    My third invisible eye will make your whole cellular structure detereorize //
    I reach far in my lines farther than science nobody can reach farther than mine//
    Even intellectual mathematicians cant add my division//
    I’ve memorized and mastered my mission flowing faster than bullets in war zone//
    Im infectious and relieve pain like cortisone I bring cold flows that shiver the bones//
    Chizzeling stones sizzling battlers starting off in this tentative for the sensitive//
    I bring a plethora of rap vendettas like verbal a berretta instead of the lead ugh//
    I stab with the graphite in graphic fights distorting gravity causing flight//
    Leave you motionless with motions sickness motion the men to move with a swiftness//
    My quickness leaves victims in stitches like they was woven I was chosen composing//
    Come at me vertically try hurting me oh so hauntingly and get slashed horizontally //
    I come religious in homilies against somber emcees with the soberest flow//
    That goes over those who oppose go toe to toe and nose to nose for those who knows//
    Come at me I fill your rap blanks in like cavities so can it be casualties master of these//
    Master of ceremonies the one and only handle a man strangle a man like only canibus can//
    Cater a man to a ravenous ram or a savage of man salvage the damned//
    Come at me if you think you can catch me I hinder this man I burn kindle a flame//
    You couldn’t catch me if you was the gingerbread man//
    Come off hard and raw tough like a mile high obstacles you obsolete //
    Why not just admit defeat I eat emcees in my sleep //
    And tear them apart I end up eating my sheets like nightmares my sight scares//
    I arrest you in cardiac you inebriated whack I sling flak like black liquid//
    So try and stick this sickness infecting all who take courses into it like aids//
    Evade my grade of lyrical perfectionism vexed in perplexed positions//
    Theres nothing you can show me scope emcees with silencers to silence ya//
    Sever ya head and sever till dead sever all my bars till not one of ‘ems left//
    Versus my verses you get carried in hurses aint able to be savable by nurses//
    Buried in churches cuz your words came off the worstest //
    We ain't friends tryin' to make amends//
    If you ain't ever stole a gate you can take a fence// -Eminem

  • #2
    nice piece....

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    • #3
      thanx... n e more opinions?
      We ain't friends tryin' to make amends//
      If you ain't ever stole a gate you can take a fence// -Eminem

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