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a yo this is from one of my boys an up and comer...critque his stuff

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  • a yo this is from one of my boys an up and comer...critque his stuff

    Man Im tiered of these fake ass rappers/talking bout they money n they cars/but the closest thing they got/are Twinkies and Hershey bars/all u ever here is teens trying to be gangsters/fighting and cussing like it makes them hard/That just makes u a retard/I’m not gonna play about my life/rapping about cars and smoking Cuban cigars/that isn’t who I am/so I’m not gonna make fake rhymes/maybe if people knew the whole story/they wouldn’t waste they money/on all these people who have whack rhymes/that’s just what I think no one take it harshly/I’m just telling what other people don’t see/taken everything literally like they the best ever seen/I’m talking about rap being a game/all that it is are words to a beat/that isn’t the only way to get off the streets/although some can make it a living/but your wasting your time on a dream/that’ll never reached/your closer to death by Freddy when u sleep/I may not win the battle but ill when the war/fill u with more holes than a golf course/but id rather talk about your mother/but that’s easy she’s married to your brother/talking everything about me/but what about u/or your girl/Ill just leave u alone/like your mother did you/I aint going to be playin no more/If u wanna go against me I don’t care/You can have the title/Ill say u beat me in the battle/I don’t really care/I just do what I like/ I don’t make it who I am/



    how is it?
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    its fire man!
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    0
    its ight u need work
    50.00%
    2
    put that shit back in the closet! its wak
    50.00%
    2

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  • #2
    nothin that great, structure it better, put it in bars
    The Big 4
    http://youtu.be/NMMUh37BWEE The Truth
    http://youtu.be/PT_j38VUAuE Rondo
    http://youtu.be/yhTKSdWRC0I KG
    http://youtu.be/3VhwzKGkvjg Ray

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    • #3
      needs work
      "All i need is one mic.. ~All i need is one blunt, one page, one pen an one prayer, tell ALLAH to forgive me for one sin, as a matter of fact maybe more then one, i look back at all the hatred against me, FUKK ALL OF EM...~"

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      • #4
        shits pretty dragged on....words our outplayed...take fitz advice put it into bars...potential there just need to remap that shit all up....payce
        Watch as the room rocks
        Mentally moonwalk
        Mixed media slang
        Banging in your boom box verbal violence
        Lyrical stylist
        In a time when rock hip hop rhymes are childish
        You cant tempt me with rhymes that are empty
        Rapping to a beat doesnt make you an emcee
        With your lack of skill and facility
        Youre killing me
        And a DJ in the group just for credibility

        //\BATTLE RECORD//\ 4-0

        \\/DEFEATED//\
        Noxshus (KO)
        Kg Tha Kid (KO)
        Master-Minded (KO)
        hallaatatlanta (KO)

        STILL REPN THE BATTLE-AXE LABEL

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        • #5
          its alrite
          q

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          • #6
            its alrite...iwas feelin it his being real iwas feeling it alot...props... yo lep give me another round u spit first this time when u have the time...lol

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            • #7
              I wrote this, no lie ask Deltaboy if u dont believe me

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