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a yo this is from one of my boys an up and comer...critque his stuff

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  • whitemike_8_87
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    I wrote this, no lie ask Deltaboy if u dont believe me

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  • Soldier_
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    its alrite...iwas feelin it his being real iwas feeling it alot...props... yo lep give me another round u spit first this time when u have the time...lol

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  • da Leprechaun
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    its alrite

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  • Exsticide
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    shits pretty dragged on....words our outplayed...take fitz advice put it into bars...potential there just need to remap that shit all up....payce

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  • ~~ALLAH~~
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    needs work

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  • Fitz
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    nothin that great, structure it better, put it in bars

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  • a yo this is from one of my boys an up and comer...critque his stuff

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    its fire man!
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    its ight u need work
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    put that shit back in the closet! its wak
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    Man Im tiered of these fake ass rappers/talking bout they money n they cars/but the closest thing they got/are Twinkies and Hershey bars/all u ever here is teens trying to be gangsters/fighting and cussing like it makes them hard/That just makes u a retard/I’m not gonna play about my life/rapping about cars and smoking Cuban cigars/that isn’t who I am/so I’m not gonna make fake rhymes/maybe if people knew the whole story/they wouldn’t waste they money/on all these people who have whack rhymes/that’s just what I think no one take it harshly/I’m just telling what other people don’t see/taken everything literally like they the best ever seen/I’m talking about rap being a game/all that it is are words to a beat/that isn’t the only way to get off the streets/although some can make it a living/but your wasting your time on a dream/that’ll never reached/your closer to death by Freddy when u sleep/I may not win the battle but ill when the war/fill u with more holes than a golf course/but id rather talk about your mother/but that’s easy she’s married to your brother/talking everything about me/but what about u/or your girl/Ill just leave u alone/like your mother did you/I aint going to be playin no more/If u wanna go against me I don’t care/You can have the title/Ill say u beat me in the battle/I don’t really care/I just do what I like/ I don’t make it who I am/



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