Keystyle Freestle (Rhymin Words pt. 8) good shit I promise

[NewPorT]

It's my habitual ritual to spit through my open ventricles//
my spiritual lyricals effect the mental and the phsyical//
fuck your pitiful minimal words cuz u eccentrical//
the intrical cinicle flow I explode ain't difficult//
it's mystical individual and original//
my lines is literal pivotal to the pinnacle//
leave you miserable cuz I got the energy to be or not to be
I'm shakesbeer lyrically you fearin me//
when fools hearin me that shake timidly//
I make no guarantees my decree as an emcee//
this exceeds even me which is seen easily//
I flow like the seven seas//
complecity like trigonometry//
fuck the A B C's I'm perplex//
call me treacherous//
I confess I possess//
the will to be the noblest//
I'm stressed, struggle to be the best in the midwest//
if u protest or detest//
I suggest u take a breath//
you'll meet your death or be depressed//
excuse me while I take a rest//

[dsd]

take that bull shit off of your page..................... and if you want to battle just le me know..... DSD

[NewPorT]

ok newbie, earn some credibility round here for u
begin to talk shit to me, or anyone for that matter

[I*k]

thaz not dat bad...shit could have some more elevation to it but it anit dat bad at all good job
Un1

[NewPorT]

appreciate it
thanx

[sHaDy_TrIcE]

ya that was sweet..i liked the line about triginometry..shit i failed my triginometry test i wrote yesterday...yeah what the fuck is dsd talkin about..first off hes a newbie so am I..but i aint runnin my mouth..u should battle each other

[NewPorT]

thanx
I don;t normally hate on new people
but when wanna give me some shit
when they have no reputation on the board
I get a lil aggrivated

[Exsticide]

Newport! wuaht....dawg....you came down with to many big words kinda stuttering the flow...shits tight though...lates

[NewPorT]

lol if u fell off tryin to find it I don;t know what to tell you
I can flow to it perfectly

[NewPorT]

uppin for feedback

[triggs-01]

ya ima newbie here, but that shits tight...lots of vocab, nice...and it flowed for me...

[NewPorT]

appreciate the feedback thanx

[NewPorT]

uppin

[Symptom]

yea that was all in all a good rhyme.. its flowed quite nicely.

[Black-Ball]

yo I thought the rhymes was tight, the flow was good. nice elavation shits tight