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  • Check this ryhme yo..what?

    Instead of this pad, let me linger a bit,
    what is this, this shit wont let me quit
    my head full, this grip that doesnt give a shit, fuck, suck
    you mother fuckin mutts..If I were you I'd give it a minute or 2
    before I show you whos who
    so i dont have to do what I do
    skip do da doo, skip to ma loo
    how do I know what Yo what
    when I show up, the bottles empty
    tempt me to go thru the steps
    end up in the same place, face to face
    just what i thought, why I lyrically rip you,
    convict you...judge, jury & sentence...
    when this pen leaks your chin breaks, cracks & crumbles
    at the hands of this verbal assault
    manipulate, intellect wont let me rest
    vest of a genius with a ten inch penis
    mumbo jumbo, just a snack dummy, hold it for me
    unloosen the child proof cap, down the hatch
    10 minutes later, fade you suckers, duck quick
    right up out of this bitch, i cant fly high enough for my mind
    blind enough to give a fuck, what?

  • #2
    ^ elevate ur shit man, not hatin but really elevate it
    The Big 4
    http://youtu.be/NMMUh37BWEE The Truth
    http://youtu.be/PT_j38VUAuE Rondo
    http://youtu.be/yhTKSdWRC0I KG
    http://youtu.be/3VhwzKGkvjg Ray

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    • #3
      like the wordplay but I couldnt understand what you were talkin about!
      FREE BEATS!!!
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      • #4
        elevate
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        • #5
          I agree with you geetheripper..to be honest, thats my first attempt at this....I dint have any structure but kind of let my mind go with it. Maybe not to my degree, but some of the best ryhmes seem to kind of wild, off the wall, but below the surface they have more direction. Any samples or good rhymes you have let me know. I need ryhmes that include all the key elements..thanks..

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          • #6
            Wow, that sucked so much it was funny. Don't elevate...it will never work for you.

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            • #7
              work on your shit
              "This is paradise, I'm tellin' ya. This town like a great big pussy jus' waitin' to get fucked."

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              • #8
                yo that sucked more ass then my mom does on a sunday night in a red and blue thong even i could rap that
                Lyrical Thug


                wins:21
                losses:7
                Ko's:17

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                • #9
                  ^lol

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                  • #10
                    yeah that shit fucking blowed ass man u really gotta work up on yo skillz man

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                    • #11
                      Ahem

                      what

                      the

                      fuck

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                      • #12
                        if u worked more on your lines u would be pretty good man
                        Lyrical Thug


                        wins:21
                        losses:7
                        Ko's:17

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                        • #13
                          hey look whoz talkin dumb ass u cant rap for shit u little fucknut

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                          • #14
                            man dat wuz sad man dis aint no damn country site u assmonkey
                            Win: 6
                            Loss: 2
                            K.O: 3

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                            • #15
                              spit then..what?

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