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  • Read This Yall Holla Back.

    Yo this is me yall...

    Bitches im COMIN VICIOUS and wit DANGER,
    U wanna know the real manin of C.V.D well im not ur savour,
    Im doin u a favour wit this,
    And if u scared to fuck ur be usin a tube to piss,
    Up in a here im the odd one like drumand,
    Yall are all black so u can see me when i be comin,
    This is me im alot better than 50 cent,
    When im buyin a mansion yall are all missin rent,
    I fuck hoes morning nite and noon,
    So i dont need a girl like usher 'P' and loon,
    Im known as the keeper so call me crimson,
    If not ill chock ya till ya skin looks like the simpsons,
    Fuck money when i want a car ill be bribing ford,
    Hav the fools on the edge like they were standing on a diving board,
    Talk shit then u wont be able to see to well,
    Yall on T4 when we and my crews on TRL,
    I lov my girl coz shes a bit nite,
    But she like cinderella coz she fucks of at midnite,

    yall wot ya think feedback please peeps.
    ina bit yall.
    peace!

  • #2
    eh it flowed good but ya needa elevate ur lyrics and shit, keep workin
    The Big 4
    http://youtu.be/NMMUh37BWEE The Truth
    http://youtu.be/PT_j38VUAuE Rondo
    http://youtu.be/yhTKSdWRC0I KG
    http://youtu.be/3VhwzKGkvjg Ray

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    • #3
      cheers man wot u think i reall need to work on spicificaully.
      holla bk man.
      peace!

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      • #4
        well i thought the multis were alright and the creativity was ok for a beginner, i thought that it was very good for a beginner. You got some good little things here and there, but the rhyme schemes were a little simple and so were the creativity.....expand ur vocab is what im sayin, use really tough words, dont be afraid to play around with words u know? thats the fun part, just throwin random words together and shit, keep workin tho man, only can go up from here
        The Big 4
        http://youtu.be/NMMUh37BWEE The Truth
        http://youtu.be/PT_j38VUAuE Rondo
        http://youtu.be/yhTKSdWRC0I KG
        http://youtu.be/3VhwzKGkvjg Ray

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        • #5
          yea, alright for a beginner, u got potential...
          Your flow style seemed alright, but I couldn't really tell ya unless I heard ya,
          I agree wit fitz, more wordplay, think outside the box...
          I like how u used synonyms though good job with that,
          You can only get better from here
          FREE BEATS!!!
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          www.myspace.com/officialsoundLab

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