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    Hers my first ever verse that i actually bothered to sit down and write. Its a Ja rule dis...please rate it

    Is Ja aware of the fact that he looks like a rat,
    A wannabe Pac thinking he tough with a gat,
    Fuck that, I’m new to this rap…the new kid,
    I aint stupid nuff to do the same shit that you did,
    You cant rap but put yaself against everyone else,
    You aint even got the sales like Eminem and D12,
    Theres sumfin between you and Shady records called distance,
    That’s the only fuckin thing keeping you in existence,
    You wanna end this life let me be of assistance,
    Ill end it this instance with no resitance,
    Motherfucka…You think you a gangsta cause you got a gun,
    So were they all G’s back up in world war 1?,
    Ja thinks he’s tough now he’s talking to the masses,
    Once again Murder INC talking outta their asses,
    The only way they get attention is if Ashanti flashes,
    But they cant see that cause Ja needs some glasses,
    And the big problem with ja’s raps is,
    He always getting worse till the day he collapses,
    Ja thinks his raps are hot but they cold,
    Mine are even hotter than stolen gold,
    I still got my soul and yours was sold,
    Now murder INCs old you might as well fold
    If you didn’t put ya pride on the line you wudda kept it
    Get you in a ring with me and I go hectic,
    You like a wannabe G takin antiseptic,
    Too bad you can’t see your raps pathetic,
    Murder INCs a joke come on you heard me,
    Aftermath gonna leave you in surgery,
    You sweatin like a pedofile in a nursery,
    Trace me if you want but you aint neva gonna hurt me
    Cain is for Charlie, and Delta is for Cain


  • #2
    that was pretty good, I like the "sweatin like a pedofile in a nursery" funny
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    • #3
      ^the best comment ive had so far...in fact its the ONLY good one lol..they just ripped me on the news board and said it was the shittest ever
      Cain is for Charlie, and Delta is for Cain

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      • #4
        nice spit....ja does look like a rat
        Watch as the room rocks
        Mentally moonwalk
        Mixed media slang
        Banging in your boom box verbal violence
        Lyrical stylist
        In a time when rock hip hop rhymes are childish
        You cant tempt me with rhymes that are empty
        Rapping to a beat doesnt make you an emcee
        With your lack of skill and facility
        Youre killing me
        And a DJ in the group just for credibility

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        \\/DEFEATED//\
        Noxshus (KO)
        Kg Tha Kid (KO)
        Master-Minded (KO)
        hallaatatlanta (KO)

        STILL REPN THE BATTLE-AXE LABEL

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        • #5
          umm its just me but i dont really feel people who do disses on stars cuz its really easy to do, anyways- rating the verse itself

          it was good, i liked the pedofile rhyme, very clever and funny. the flow was good and the lyrics were good, but some advice, dont rely on writing verses on stars or anything, cuz its easy. anyways, i understand its just fuckin around so its a very good verse and i liked it, keep it up but next time do somethin different, otherwise i liked it, good shit keep workin, peace
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          • #6
            good stuff
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            • #7
              nice one for a shop owner- c wot i mean?!! this is exactly wot i eamnt as i envisioned you as a shop owner. you'd be doing this shit wit y'customers etc... people'd LOVE comn by and saying hi.

              anyway 'bout the verse...... fun to read heaps clever..... but the paedophile rhyme.. well it kinda doenst make sense in context cos if you think about why a paedophile would be sweatin in a nursery is quite differnt to the sweat if being in surgery after being beat up. but yeh it is great rhyme line.

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              • #8
                lol cheers...i dont usually dis on stars it was just because my mates were...i have wrote a few more verses but im i dont want to post them until i got them on audio.
                Cain is for Charlie, and Delta is for Cain

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                • #9
                  nice.. looks good

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                  • #10
                    lol
                    Cain is for Charlie, and Delta is for Cain

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                    • #11
                      Elonzo........this is terrible...ur whack .

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                      • #12
                        shut up..i read urs and you suck...so you cant say shit
                        Cain is for Charlie, and Delta is for Cain

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                        • #13
                          i am the best emcee on the net u fool ! u better give me respect or i will write some shit about u to mister faggot .

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                          • #14
                            write shit about me then faggot....your too far up ur own ass
                            Cain is for Charlie, and Delta is for Cain

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                            • #15
                              ^ i agree,Elonzo ur awful..u need to elevate your shit dogg .
                              Originally posted by SpeechLess
                              With ma shit you RATE, TAPED n RAPED on the first DATE/
                              If you fall u BREAK lika PLATE, Cuz lika baloon u poped now u gonna DEFLATE/
                              ^ Wackess of the month

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