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    have your ass levatate like david blaine/perform magic tricks on u dat leave u dazed for days/dis shit is craze some call me insane/glock in my hand leave your head hang/next time u better watch out what u say/imma do dis shit until i get paid/only shoot my boss cuz he wont give me a raise/step on my shoes i am breakin both of your legs/thurr no time to waste gotta get dis album out before da end of the day

    tell me what u think on a scale from 1/10

  • #2
    someone rate it

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    • #3
      aiight, ur freestlyes's good. i like tha qwik n short lines n' u gotta nice flow goin 2. sum of tha lines r a lil simple, but ova all tha verse is good. just keep workin a lil bit in order 2 get harder punches n' then ull b set. from a 1-10 scale w/ 1 bein tha lowest, n' 10 being tha highest, ur verse is an 8 good work dawg.

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      • #4
        ni*ga if you want real advice.. elevate, your flow is off somethin chronic, your rhymes were simplistic and barely rhymed.. elevate.
        EII
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        • #5
          haha did you mention chronic?? lol
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          • #6
            ***** let see u spit sumin shit didnt even rhyme u crazy or u cant read cuz dat shit rhyme to me

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            • #7
              yeah that was really bad
              "This is paradise, I'm tellin' ya. This town like a great big pussy jus' waitin' to get fucked."

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              • #8
                G Unit, no offense, but it didnt, no flow at all....maybe to u it did, but to me and others it didnt.... structure ur shit better, put it in bars
                The Big 4
                http://youtu.be/NMMUh37BWEE The Truth
                http://youtu.be/PT_j38VUAuE Rondo
                http://youtu.be/yhTKSdWRC0I KG
                http://youtu.be/3VhwzKGkvjg Ray

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                • #9
                  Originally posted by GuNiTsOlDiEr856
                  ***** let see u spit sumin shit didnt even rhyme u crazy or u cant read cuz dat shit rhyme to me
                  nikka what? i got ten million times the skill you got, fuckin bitch.. tellin me you got skill.. whatever the fuck ever.
                  EII
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                  Illusory|Retro Fo|DuPoint|Check|Fitz|Pawl Derty|InK|Teknique
                  Nothin's Equivalent...

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                  • #10
                    that shit sucked trust me and that firstline is wat jay-z said the rest just sucked
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                    • #11
                      lol u ask for opinions and when u get Kures u bitch about it, calm down elevate

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                      • #12
                        that fuckin sucked... no offense.
                        Love, live life, proceed, progress

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