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    “After the day I die?
    by jay wilson(proven)
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    After I die, I don’t know what ideas of mine will remain
    Am I just a soldier cut cold, forgotten in war and slain
    I’m like a shadow, a phantom, that lies lonely and betrayed
    Yet with no true appearance in no truth to the images portrayed
    What do I have to look forward to except refusals of acceptance
    More wishes to simply die, more testing of my patience
    Some day’s I question if I’m even allowed to be breathing
    I’m an anger fuelled kid who not in favor of living
    Why the fuck don’t I just take a knife to hell with this
    It’s these endless battles I fight with my people for some sort of purpose
    Or you gota be proven to be excepted within your own place
    If it all came down to it, I’d be the first my friends would sacrifice
    I feel alive except I got a knife sticking through my neck, giving me a sore throat
    I wouldn’t find myself happiness if I just dropped off the earth with a suicidal note
    If anybody ever put a fucking second of thought through their fucking mind
    I might not be the only one standing here are you mutha fuckers blind
    To me bleeding out of my mouth as I rap, and my anger swelling up my eyes
    Do I just not exist or do they find humor in the terror of my cries
    When I just wanna end it with no hesitation, I’d have no problem with a stabbing
    I’m only asking for some consideration, I can’t read what your thinking
    It’s like they kick my feet up under me deliberately
    Like a the columbine shooters, they don’t think rationally

    Chorus:
    What’s going to be
    After the day I die
    What’s gona happen to me
    After the day I die
    Who’s gona morn for me
    After the day I die
    Who’s gona come to my grave
    After the day I die

    As a teenager nothing satisfies me more than the glimmer of a blade
    Outcast and exclusion, no matter how I stand for myself it’ll never fade
    There’s only one way to be born and too many ways to die
    But I yell at the top my lungs to these people that always deny
    A place for my fucking existence to reside and when the disgust died
    I’m just another kid who’s a slave to a fucking hell of society
    Of human beings who divides themselves into to 3 levels of diversity
    Your either cool, a jock, a nobody, your not allowed to be different
    I’d love to meet up in a dark alley with these ones who I confront
    Who make me ask what’s gona take me, age, a weapon or suicide
    So much hate revealed behind a curtain as I put the down verse, no I’m fucking not stressed
    Accumulating and dispersing so much tears and anger worse than two shots to the chest
    What of me is gona live on, will I be kept in the back of your minds or forgotten
    Or will I be famous or will I remain nameless inside a coffin decayed and rotten
    Maybe I’m just too young, but I’ve got my brain filled with thoughts of death
    Never given any silence till I’ve breathe my last fucking breath
    (Chorus)

  • #2
    Pretty deep

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    • #3
      nice drop
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      • #4
        not bad. it was good. *cough* counselor *cough* just kidding. It was good though!
        We ain't friends tryin' to make amends//
        If you ain't ever stole a gate you can take a fence// -Eminem

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        • #5
          Man, that shit is deep - nice drop.

          Sorry if you really feel that way - but you obviously have a way with expressing your true emotions with words...amazingly if you do.

          Seriously feeling this shit, keep up the good work.

          "There’s only one way to be born and too many ways to die" Is without a doubt my favourite line in the whole spit.

          You might want to work on some lines - they seemed, well, a little bit silly...

          "I feel alive except I got a knife sticking through my neck, giving me a sore throat"

          Also, "Your" should be "You're" in some circumstances - as you are abreivating "You are" - not that is actually matters, but seen as though the rest of the spit is written with a generaly high level of English, I thought I'd point that out.

          Ste.
          - I'll point out the good AND bad.
          "We can't afford to live, so abortions rise
          Can't afford the truth, so we told to lie
          Can't afford a funeral, 'cause the costs is high
          God damn, we can't even afford to die!"
          - Monopoly by Papoose

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          • #6
            Thanks people.
            Uppin'.

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            • #7
              yeah that was some deep shit! good i liked it...
              :Yur Worst Enemy:


              -ZeRo-





              Seeing is Believing..No one believes me cuz No One Can See Me

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