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  • Roughly 70 Bars

    Heres some thing from about two months ago. Give me information on how it sounds, what could have used tuning up, if you cared for any of it.

    My compliments alliterate syllables at a slightly similar rate//
    I conjugate the verb to plural //
    My style is a road that’s rural it just ain’t what your used to//
    I can even spit acoustic to music in herds of rap //
    Its awkward like youve never heard of that//
    Keep it conscious not nonsense and constant in flow //
    Work out verbally doing lyrical cardio forget the radio//
    Only way I listen to it is if I get played on every station though//
    I spit acid to leave your ass and heart with gaps//
    Check infections that last with an echocardiograph //
    I come off full force in blasts like laser beams//
    I phase emcees leave them looking dazed hazily //
    Rip amazingly rap accordingly I contort your limbs//
    Entice the life of men and mice with a device to torment//
    Your body’s adorned with blood hostile and horrid//
    But yo none the less every word is vital//
    But your style is whacker than Osama bin Ladin reading the Bible //
    My style is incredible massive and projective and I’m sure that I detect//
    A rap wannabe a reject with defects defeated//
    Your verbal cess pool is depleted//
    Im just this damn good so no Im not conceited//
    This young emcee a superb individual with a style so unknown yo//
    Un social but in raps I blast vast and braggadocio //
    My vocal can only be heard local so I have to repeat it//
    My style is so sick its like rummaging garbage to eat it//
    I can not only bridge the gap but convert a kid//
    A mastery perfected I surpass even supreme special superlatives//
    I tear apart raps in a way so ravenous//
    Its decisions made unanimous drawn on the canvass //
    You can’t stand this when words clash in various ways of scariness //
    I rap careless lungs compressed in chest rap so fast I’m airless //
    My fame would fade away like a jump shot and clog arteries with blood clots//
    Combust pipes and explode words of verbs to concur unsure//
    I allure and stutter in clutters of letters to become better //
    My words are almost as visual as if I could choreograph //
    But I stay at the nucleus cuz I’m hoping not to be in a cell and rap//
    I’d rather start a cartel than that but I flow zealous rap//
    I flow so hot I broke the thermostat while you sound like your nervous rap//
    Do I rap in repetition what word is in my next decision //
    Is it repeat reptile rapture or derision, my beautiful mind//
    I design raps that I envision a crash collision of sentences //
    Am I mystical or a mirage turned to mythical mythology //
    I’m under constant thought and study like anthropology//
    A human anomaly partially practical in peoples philosophies//
    Costing countless constant casualties carelessly//
    Is my rap endless or just five minutes to pass time until the next census//
    My senses sent us a speech that’s worthy of the hip hop nation//
    The underground revelation were stuck in a stereotypical cycle//
    Its degrading to me to debate fake emcees when I know I’m right though//
    Strip the weak, defeat emcees drop to my feet and break to the beat //
    I divide and decide my mind is sublime in time for rhymes that threaten to collide//
    Surprise and rise from frozen ice to hold in a vice your eyes with sties//
    I know the truth but its just that I cant tell what I like//
    Got mixed up and accidently killed a kid named Mike (Mic)//
    Yo am I cosmic comet or comic stomping the shit out you//
    Like wine from grapes why wait //
    I correlate to the words you say and blast them back but better//
    Ask me when Im gonna stop this and I reply saying never//
    I go with steady rap no parties and no confetti rap //
    Instead I slash the competition with derision //
    I keep my raps considerable//
    I far surpass emcees who can’t spit multi syllable //
    Still I clear the place even if I’m not respected neither contested//
    Chest congested that’s why Im needing an inhaler//
    Breaths becoming short when I rap due to heart failure//
    Hold on and wait for second wind //
    I’m ready again coming to slash your fam and kin //
    You fathom the thoughts of how I win//
    Its easy, I put words together that rhyme when I write it//
    Hate me love me or undecided, you know that you cant deny it//

    criticize below
    We ain't friends tryin' to make amends//
    If you ain't ever stole a gate you can take a fence// -Eminem

  • #2
    i think u mean 70 lines
    but good stuff
    q

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    • #3
      yeah not bad, could elevate ya shit, but not bad..
      :Yur Worst Enemy:


      -ZeRo-





      Seeing is Believing..No one believes me cuz No One Can See Me

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