A Dream

[weeble]

Here's another one. it's only the first verse so far so let me know what you think...

cant wait till I can rock five houses on my neck/ hundred thousand dollar checks/ hoes bouncin out the Lex/ 'stead of stones bouncin out the tech/ ain't blown up but i'm lit ain't been put out right yet/ and try as I might I might try to write a rhyme to get in the limelight but still ain't got the right hype to get my rhymes heard/ hit five birds with my words instead of two with a stone/ if you would've known/ I was alive and rappin/ I probably could've been in a movie with my life as a caption/ combine all my scrappin with my rappin technique/ and wake up early one mornin and wonder what happen to me/ just go to ya kids room mad as can be/ not happy to see/ my pic on each wall/ clappin the streets/ go ahead and grab a safe belt and strap yaself in ya seat/ I know what ya thinkin ya thought reality,d be/ more hazardous free/ when in reality I just realized I woke up from havin a dream...

So let me know what ya think...

[SpeechLess]

i dont like how u type it try it like this:
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sagd sa gda sgd asdg asw dgae//

sagasdg sagd as ga sdg aweg dsge//
sgsa gas dga ga//gawgawgd d gsa a//

s gasdg agd sgda sgsag gs as ga g g//
fdhs shfd sh sfd hzs red bhgdsrh//

You know anyways overall it was ok, not bad...elevate tho...

[weeble]

Like this...
cant wait till I can rock five houses on my neck//
hundred thousand dollar checks//
hoes bouncin out the Lex//
'stead of stones bouncin out the tech//
ain't blown up but i'm lit ain't been put out right yet//
and try as I might I might try to write a rhyme to get in the limelight but still ain't got the right hype to get my rhymes heard//
hit five birds with my words instead of two with a stone//
if you would've known//
I was alive and rappin//
I probably could've been in a movie with my life as a caption//
combine all my scrappin with my rappin technique//
and wake up early one mornin and wonder what happen to me//
just go to ya kids room mad as can be//
not happy to see//
my pic on each wall//
clappin the streets//
go ahead and grab a safe belt and strap yaself in ya seat//
I know what ya thinkin ya thought reality,d be//
more hazardous free//
when in reality I just realized I woke up from havin a dream...

Yeah?