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  • A Dream

    Here's another one. it's only the first verse so far so let me know what you think...

    cant wait till I can rock five houses on my neck/ hundred thousand dollar checks/ hoes bouncin out the Lex/ 'stead of stones bouncin out the tech/ ain't blown up but i'm lit ain't been put out right yet/ and try as I might I might try to write a rhyme to get in the limelight but still ain't got the right hype to get my rhymes heard/ hit five birds with my words instead of two with a stone/ if you would've known/ I was alive and rappin/ I probably could've been in a movie with my life as a caption/ combine all my scrappin with my rappin technique/ and wake up early one mornin and wonder what happen to me/ just go to ya kids room mad as can be/ not happy to see/ my pic on each wall/ clappin the streets/ go ahead and grab a safe belt and strap yaself in ya seat/ I know what ya thinkin ya thought reality,d be/ more hazardous free/ when in reality I just realized I woke up from havin a dream...

    So let me know what ya think...

  • #2
    i dont like how u type it try it like this:
    sgdsadg dsag asg asg sd gsda ggsg//
    sagd sa gda sgd asdg asw dgae//

    sagasdg sagd as ga sdg aweg dsge//
    sgsa gas dga ga//gawgawgd d gsa a//

    s gasdg agd sgda sgsag gs as ga g g//
    fdhs shfd sh sfd hzs red bhgdsrh//

    You know anyways overall it was ok, not bad...elevate tho...
    _____=+| 30-4, 25KO |+=_____

    *23 Straight KO Wins* Still Waiten for someone to match that

    * ReTiReD *

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    • #3
      Like this...
      cant wait till I can rock five houses on my neck//
      hundred thousand dollar checks//
      hoes bouncin out the Lex//
      'stead of stones bouncin out the tech//
      ain't blown up but i'm lit ain't been put out right yet//
      and try as I might I might try to write a rhyme to get in the limelight but still ain't got the right hype to get my rhymes heard//
      hit five birds with my words instead of two with a stone//
      if you would've known//
      I was alive and rappin//
      I probably could've been in a movie with my life as a caption//
      combine all my scrappin with my rappin technique//
      and wake up early one mornin and wonder what happen to me//
      just go to ya kids room mad as can be//
      not happy to see//
      my pic on each wall//
      clappin the streets//
      go ahead and grab a safe belt and strap yaself in ya seat//
      I know what ya thinkin ya thought reality,d be//
      more hazardous free//
      when in reality I just realized I woke up from havin a dream...

      Yeah?

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