RaTe DiS !!!!

[LoCgHoSt]

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Yo ChEk It!!!!

Mind tactical panaramic fanatic causin static so panic/ so chill/
an mc that verbally explode for real/
da ill/ fellin caskets on a deadly buzz cuz/
da head rush killin motha fukas with da led touch/
there dome crush/
da flood rush/
its a must dat i lyrically bust/
verbal ryme lust/
turnin bitch ass mcs in to dust/
so test my tehcs twins/
gold plated from my trigger to my hair pin/
must win/
battle rappin like its a sin/
guts spin/
when twin tehcs kik in/
and outcha head/
lokin for da exit wound outa bak yo head/
foo ya dead/

ReAl G ShIt !!!!

LoCgHoSt

[Trem]

yeah it was alright, the multies were sick and shit.. but the flow was off so.. yeah otherwise i liked it all.

[Booty1icious]

Jeah, I agree with the Above, the structure of it wasn't good, but the multi's were straight..

Stay up

~1~

[WHITEnight]

it was good

[da Leprechaun]

good stuff

[SpeechLess]

was ok, nice multies...

[BulletProof]

i agree flow was off but some nice multies

[SpeechLess]

hewres my overall:
Elevate!! try some nice punchlines flow is a must all that shit, just elevate dawg, good job..

[Exsticide]

elevate ur verse...throw down some other words to fit in between and spit ur flow dont just write it....good shit though

[LoCgHoSt]

ThAnKs YaLl

[TAKE TWO]

flow sucked needs more content
u got good vocab and know how to use it kinda
thats sumthin not every muthafucka has
keep at it you will elevate u got potential
just listen 2 wat ppl gotta say and werk with it