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  • RaTe DiS !!!!

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    Yo ChEk It!!!!

    Mind tactical panaramic fanatic causin static so panic/ so chill/
    an mc that verbally explode for real/
    da ill/ fellin caskets on a deadly buzz cuz/
    da head rush killin motha fukas with da led touch/
    there dome crush/
    da flood rush/
    its a must dat i lyrically bust/
    verbal ryme lust/
    turnin bitch ass mcs in to dust/
    so test my tehcs twins/
    gold plated from my trigger to my hair pin/
    must win/
    battle rappin like its a sin/
    guts spin/
    when twin tehcs kik in/
    and outcha head/
    lokin for da exit wound outa bak yo head/
    foo ya dead/

    ReAl G ShIt !!!!

    LoCgHoSt
    |< () () |_
    "My FlOwS sTik tO yOuR mInD lIkE tAgS oN bRikS"

  • #2
    yeah it was alright, the multies were sick and shit.. but the flow was off so.. yeah otherwise i liked it all.
    All through high school i had braids
    I kept mad blades
    Stabbin teachers to death that gave me bad grades - R.I.P Big L.

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    • #3
      Jeah, I agree with the Above, the structure of it wasn't good, but the multi's were straight..

      Stay up

      ~1~
      What, Just coz I'm a woman, I have less ability?/
      After two bars your screamin, damn girl, your KILLIN me/

      bLaH.

      Don't Look At My Signature.

      PrOinG.

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      • #4
        it was good
        "This is paradise, I'm tellin' ya. This town like a great big pussy jus' waitin' to get fucked."

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        • #5
          good stuff
          q

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          43-2-35

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          • #6
            was ok, nice multies...
            _____=+| 30-4, 25KO |+=_____

            *23 Straight KO Wins* Still Waiten for someone to match that

            * ReTiReD *

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            • #7
              i agree flow was off but some nice multies

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              • #8
                hewres my overall:
                Elevate!! try some nice punchlines flow is a must all that shit, just elevate dawg, good job..
                _____=+| 30-4, 25KO |+=_____

                *23 Straight KO Wins* Still Waiten for someone to match that

                * ReTiReD *

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                • #9
                  elevate ur verse...throw down some other words to fit in between and spit ur flow dont just write it....good shit though
                  Watch as the room rocks
                  Mentally moonwalk
                  Mixed media slang
                  Banging in your boom box verbal violence
                  Lyrical stylist
                  In a time when rock hip hop rhymes are childish
                  You cant tempt me with rhymes that are empty
                  Rapping to a beat doesnt make you an emcee
                  With your lack of skill and facility
                  Youre killing me
                  And a DJ in the group just for credibility

                  //\BATTLE RECORD//\ 4-0

                  \\/DEFEATED//\
                  Noxshus (KO)
                  Kg Tha Kid (KO)
                  Master-Minded (KO)
                  hallaatatlanta (KO)

                  STILL REPN THE BATTLE-AXE LABEL

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                  • #10
                    ThAnKs YaLl
                    |< () () |_
                    "My FlOwS sTik tO yOuR mInD lIkE tAgS oN bRikS"

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                    • #11
                      flow sucked needs more content
                      u got good vocab and know how to use it kinda
                      thats sumthin not every muthafucka has
                      keep at it you will elevate u got potential
                      just listen 2 wat ppl gotta say and werk with it
                      LOFLZ!!!!!!!!
                      Originally posted by Splackavellie
                      when you eatin pussy you real close to it anyways so why not....Shit i'll eat a bitches ass with a spoon if i got to..lol
                      Originally posted by Tmaka2000
                      i cant wait till i get laid

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