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    Okay, I'm gonna spit this shit like im a fucken rookie/
    keep you eyes off my pants, bitch please stop looking/
    peepin me with a glance, this dude wants to shoot me/
    i'm deep in this trance, and this girl wants to loot me/

    I tell these ho's that my flow, comes from poisonous compounds/
    I'm quicksilver yo, with rhymes that'll leave ya hellbound/
    I been puzzlin a long time, and i still dont got a style down/
    but i improve with every line, and really shouldnt fuck around/

    I need to stop fucking with these ho's that look like jenna jameson/
    and get a good girl that knows the rap game i'm playin in/
    I'm out to conquer rappers slay them cuz they gay and hatin/
    But i'm hearing the laughter, and pray i dont fuck up my sayin's/

    but now a different subject, this is for the sluts that suck dick/
    i aint wearing no rubber, chose the wrong man to fuck with/
    but i aint complainin, you shouldnt either, since i'll nut quick/
    fuck what i'm saying, sit down and take a breather, cuz you in luck bitch/

    everyone know im the straight dude cuz i love the vagina/
    girl, i dont have hesitation to get my dick in behind ya/
    then you yell my name, Chronic rage! please be kinda'/
    okay I guess i'll be gentle, searching the clit, hah!, Found ya!/

    I must sound like a fucked bitch, i was wrongly guided/
    i shouldnt say this type of shit, I didnt,yo' my mind did!/(haha)
    but now i'm close to coming, whoops, i got her eyelid/
    "Chronic you stupid bitch, look!, Now I'm Blinded!!/

    Haha, I did this kinda quick soo this shit is gonna sound a lil too off..i dunno..
    * URBAN BLAZE *

    ~Numba1Balla~TheLegendaryAK~Homicidal~BluntMan~ChronicRage~Spyder~
    ~YaMaYee~DarkHaze~TheCore~Smokey~ThugLife~

  • #2
    1 out of 10....................ill give it a 7.3
    MILLIENIUM G's


    Wins:31
    Loss:11
    KO's:20

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    • #3
      whats you crew name?

      I must sound like a fucked bitch, i was wrongly guided/
      i shouldnt say this type of shit, I didnt,yo' my mind did!/(haha)
      but now i'm close to coming, whoops, i got her eyelid/
      "Chronic you stupid bitch, look!, Now I'm Blinded!!/

      I likr dat da most...........
      MILLIENIUM G's


      Wins:31
      Loss:11
      KO's:20

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      • #4
        Thanks for the feedback, nah I'm not in no crew, if you mean by my signature, its a line by eminem in that one song 40 0z
        * URBAN BLAZE *

        ~Numba1Balla~TheLegendaryAK~Homicidal~BluntMan~ChronicRage~Spyder~
        ~YaMaYee~DarkHaze~TheCore~Smokey~ThugLife~

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        • #5
          ill go with dax on this...hmm...one out of 10.......6.8? sounds about right your improving man

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          • #6
            cool thnx loc.
            * URBAN BLAZE *

            ~Numba1Balla~TheLegendaryAK~Homicidal~BluntMan~ChronicRage~Spyder~
            ~YaMaYee~DarkHaze~TheCore~Smokey~ThugLife~

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            • #7
              it was okay 7/10
              "This is paradise, I'm tellin' ya. This town like a great big pussy jus' waitin' to get fucked."

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              • #8
                hope its not a pick up rhyme!

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                • #9
                  Out of 10...I give it a 7.8. It was pretty good.
                  Thanx 2 Drifta 4 the av.

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                  • #10
                    8/10

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                    • #11
                      ^^ thanks for the feedback guys..
                      * URBAN BLAZE *

                      ~Numba1Balla~TheLegendaryAK~Homicidal~BluntMan~ChronicRage~Spyder~
                      ~YaMaYee~DarkHaze~TheCore~Smokey~ThugLife~

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