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    I wrote these on Dashadyboard.Can I please get some feedback


    Im white like em/
    but i aint like him/
    i flow like 50/
    But my rhymes aint that iffy/
    Im as ill as twizzy/
    But im betta at rockin tha hizzy/
    I cant say im like pac/
    cuz he's dead and im not/
    Im bout as big as B.I.G/
    were the same size him and me/
    I aint sayin im real but i do own a gat/
    I'd like to say im like luda but i dont get down like that/
    So if you wanna question my skillz/
    we'll battle after i pop these pillz/


    Watch me take 3/
    Love du taste of Tylenol 3/
    No ones as big a feind as me/
    Smoke a blunt size of a tree/
    I cut myself so I can get the morphine for free/
    Get so twitchy I jump like jet lee/
    Make sure tha cops get none of my pee/
    Im to high to rhyme/
    Im runnin outta time/
    Real soon im gunna OD/
    My parents be askin what happened to me/


    So high off grass/
    fuck you in the ass/
    overwhelmed by my mass/
    beat your fanny/
    rape your granny/
    beatin chicks makes me feel manly/
    hurting you makes me feel big/
    fact is that im a pig/
    disguise myself with a wig/
    runnin from the cops/
    break through all the locks/
    grab my new drill/
    pop my sisters birth control pills/
    put in the sharpest bit/
    tired of these kids makin fun of my zit/
    today i finally snapped/
    this is for puttin me thru all that crap/

    Dont duck down/
    im here to fuck around/
    break your nose/
    hang you with a rubber hose/
    fire off a few rounds/
    it'll echo all around town/
    make sure you dont get back up/
    dump your body outta the back of my truck/
    even if i get caught ill rhyme/
    cuz im waitin for my time/
    like sands in an hourglass/
    im here to break yo ass/
    you dont think my rhymes are ill/
    then i guess your blood will spill/
    i dont use enuff metaphors/
    thats because i was raised by whores/
    i dont know how to read or write/
    settle everything with a fight/
    sayin im a faker/
    i aint even signed and im a hitmaker/
    they wont play me cuz im a alcholic,drug dealer, hoe beater/
    motherfuckin pussy eater/
    Im sorta like bizzy/
    kill him and join D-twizzy/
    sometimes i rhyme quick sometimes i rhyme slow/
    thats why i only get with a hoe/
    make sure i have enough bars/
    fukin in the backstreet of a car/
    gotta make my flow sick/
    talk bout my dick/
    how many titties i lick/
    how many kids i rape/
    record it all on tape/
    be just like r.kelly/
    real smelly/
    like the ladies/
    when there in the 80's/
    is that gross enuff for you/
    or should i rap bout poo/



    Hatin on my style/
    My flow is vile/
    Lyrics are so ill/
    Get you dancin better than an X pill/
    Im eatin MC's like im hannibal/
    i wasnt born an ordinary mammal/
    after im done you'll never rap a-gain/
    leave you out in the rain/
    Im tryin out multi rhymes/
    but its hard when your convicted of multi crimes/
    my styles gettin better with every rap/
    ill admit my first was crap/
    Drugs seem to be my muse/
    I can also use the fact im the victim of abuse/
    at a young age i was sippin on juice/
    chuggin back gin and 40's/
    so sick you'll be prayin to the lordy/
    gotta give you time to cool down/
    but i dont got time to fool around/
    Sounds Like You That Was My Intention
    I've Paid Dues Now Dudes Pay Attention


    q


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    Velvet Revolver

  • #2
    i read the first one and then gav up on yo....sorry but i hated it


    holla!!
    April 11th, 2006 - Proof that the good die young

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    • #3
      Horrible.. sorry lol.
      Now let the night be dark for all of me.
      Let the night be too dark for me to see
      Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

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      • #4
        thats bad tho.....u need lots of work on your rhymes,and try to keep your sentence a bit longer./
        PlaYbOy

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        • #5
          Originally posted by Psycho69
          Horrible.. sorry lol.

          ^^ took the words right out of my mouth
          "This is paradise, I'm tellin' ya. This town like a great big pussy jus' waitin' to get fucked."

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          • #6
            Wow guys at the other boards like'd em alot more
            Sounds Like You That Was My Intention
            I've Paid Dues Now Dudes Pay Attention


            q


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            Velvet Revolver

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            • #7
              We have higher standards here.
              [Orange juice Brigade] You've just had a near-life experience.

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              • #8
                Originally posted by OJBShady
                We have higher standards here.
                You're new here.. shut up
                Now let the night be dark for all of me.
                Let the night be too dark for me to see
                Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

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                • #9
                  lol @ psycho
                  The Big 4
                  http://youtu.be/NMMUh37BWEE The Truth
                  http://youtu.be/PT_j38VUAuE Rondo
                  http://youtu.be/yhTKSdWRC0I KG
                  http://youtu.be/3VhwzKGkvjg Ray

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                  • #10
                    lol
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                    • #11
                      I thought it wasn't half as bad as half this shit that gets spit on this board, big ups. Don't give up yet

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                      • #12
                        damn dog, bars hella short, spit it wouldnt sound good, i dont do texts, because audio are superior by far. but if this were to be spit, it would probably sound whack as fuck. maybe not on a fast tempo, duno, but your bars need to be longer and some better rhymin, i didnt even read it all haha.

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                        • #13
                          Originally posted by Teacher
                          I thought it wasn't half as bad as half this shit that gets spit on this board, big ups. Don't give up yet
                          Look at when you signed up..

                          Shut your mouth.
                          Now let the night be dark for all of me.
                          Let the night be too dark for me to see
                          Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

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                          • #14
                            uumm not to go against the grain but i think it's hillarious-------it's so gay that i couldnt help but love it......some funny shit----i get it ha ha!
                            i dig this:

                            "i dont use enuff metaphors/
                            thats because i was raised by whores/
                            i dont know how to read or write/
                            settle everything with a fight/"

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                            • #15
                              your rhymes are ok i guess
                              though u need a little work but in all its ok

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