I wrote these on Dashadyboard.Can I please get some feedback
Im white like em/
but i aint like him/
i flow like 50/
But my rhymes aint that iffy/
Im as ill as twizzy/
But im betta at rockin tha hizzy/
I cant say im like pac/
cuz he's dead and im not/
Im bout as big as B.I.G/
were the same size him and me/
I aint sayin im real but i do own a gat/
I'd like to say im like luda but i dont get down like that/
So if you wanna question my skillz/
we'll battle after i pop these pillz/
Watch me take 3/
Love du taste of Tylenol 3/
No ones as big a feind as me/
Smoke a blunt size of a tree/
I cut myself so I can get the morphine for free/
Get so twitchy I jump like jet lee/
Make sure tha cops get none of my pee/
Im to high to rhyme/
Im runnin outta time/
Real soon im gunna OD/
My parents be askin what happened to me/
So high off grass/
fuck you in the ass/
overwhelmed by my mass/
beat your fanny/
rape your granny/
beatin chicks makes me feel manly/
hurting you makes me feel big/
fact is that im a pig/
disguise myself with a wig/
runnin from the cops/
break through all the locks/
grab my new drill/
pop my sisters birth control pills/
put in the sharpest bit/
tired of these kids makin fun of my zit/
today i finally snapped/
this is for puttin me thru all that crap/
Dont duck down/
im here to fuck around/
break your nose/
hang you with a rubber hose/
fire off a few rounds/
it'll echo all around town/
make sure you dont get back up/
dump your body outta the back of my truck/
even if i get caught ill rhyme/
cuz im waitin for my time/
like sands in an hourglass/
im here to break yo ass/
you dont think my rhymes are ill/
then i guess your blood will spill/
i dont use enuff metaphors/
thats because i was raised by whores/
i dont know how to read or write/
settle everything with a fight/
sayin im a faker/
i aint even signed and im a hitmaker/
they wont play me cuz im a alcholic,drug dealer, hoe beater/
motherfuckin pussy eater/
Im sorta like bizzy/
kill him and join D-twizzy/
sometimes i rhyme quick sometimes i rhyme slow/
thats why i only get with a hoe/
make sure i have enough bars/
fukin in the backstreet of a car/
gotta make my flow sick/
talk bout my dick/
how many titties i lick/
how many kids i rape/
record it all on tape/
be just like r.kelly/
real smelly/
like the ladies/
when there in the 80's/
is that gross enuff for you/
or should i rap bout poo/
Hatin on my style/
My flow is vile/
Lyrics are so ill/
Get you dancin better than an X pill/
Im eatin MC's like im hannibal/
i wasnt born an ordinary mammal/
after im done you'll never rap a-gain/
leave you out in the rain/
Im tryin out multi rhymes/
but its hard when your convicted of multi crimes/
my styles gettin better with every rap/
ill admit my first was crap/
Drugs seem to be my muse/
I can also use the fact im the victim of abuse/
at a young age i was sippin on juice/
chuggin back gin and 40's/
so sick you'll be prayin to the lordy/
gotta give you time to cool down/
but i dont got time to fool around/
Im white like em/
but i aint like him/
i flow like 50/
But my rhymes aint that iffy/
Im as ill as twizzy/
But im betta at rockin tha hizzy/
I cant say im like pac/
cuz he's dead and im not/
Im bout as big as B.I.G/
were the same size him and me/
I aint sayin im real but i do own a gat/
I'd like to say im like luda but i dont get down like that/
So if you wanna question my skillz/
we'll battle after i pop these pillz/
Watch me take 3/
Love du taste of Tylenol 3/
No ones as big a feind as me/
Smoke a blunt size of a tree/
I cut myself so I can get the morphine for free/
Get so twitchy I jump like jet lee/
Make sure tha cops get none of my pee/
Im to high to rhyme/
Im runnin outta time/
Real soon im gunna OD/
My parents be askin what happened to me/
So high off grass/
fuck you in the ass/
overwhelmed by my mass/
beat your fanny/
rape your granny/
beatin chicks makes me feel manly/
hurting you makes me feel big/
fact is that im a pig/
disguise myself with a wig/
runnin from the cops/
break through all the locks/
grab my new drill/
pop my sisters birth control pills/
put in the sharpest bit/
tired of these kids makin fun of my zit/
today i finally snapped/
this is for puttin me thru all that crap/
Dont duck down/
im here to fuck around/
break your nose/
hang you with a rubber hose/
fire off a few rounds/
it'll echo all around town/
make sure you dont get back up/
dump your body outta the back of my truck/
even if i get caught ill rhyme/
cuz im waitin for my time/
like sands in an hourglass/
im here to break yo ass/
you dont think my rhymes are ill/
then i guess your blood will spill/
i dont use enuff metaphors/
thats because i was raised by whores/
i dont know how to read or write/
settle everything with a fight/
sayin im a faker/
i aint even signed and im a hitmaker/
they wont play me cuz im a alcholic,drug dealer, hoe beater/
motherfuckin pussy eater/
Im sorta like bizzy/
kill him and join D-twizzy/
sometimes i rhyme quick sometimes i rhyme slow/
thats why i only get with a hoe/
make sure i have enough bars/
fukin in the backstreet of a car/
gotta make my flow sick/
talk bout my dick/
how many titties i lick/
how many kids i rape/
record it all on tape/
be just like r.kelly/
real smelly/
like the ladies/
when there in the 80's/
is that gross enuff for you/
or should i rap bout poo/
Hatin on my style/
My flow is vile/
Lyrics are so ill/
Get you dancin better than an X pill/
Im eatin MC's like im hannibal/
i wasnt born an ordinary mammal/
after im done you'll never rap a-gain/
leave you out in the rain/
Im tryin out multi rhymes/
but its hard when your convicted of multi crimes/
my styles gettin better with every rap/
ill admit my first was crap/
Drugs seem to be my muse/
I can also use the fact im the victim of abuse/
at a young age i was sippin on juice/
chuggin back gin and 40's/
so sick you'll be prayin to the lordy/
gotta give you time to cool down/
but i dont got time to fool around/
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