Somethin I'm workin on for my girl...

[NewPorT]

I started this the otha day, the first line popped in my head and
I ran wit it. I'm stuck where I am and hope to get it done in a few
days so I can record it by her birthday. lemme know what y'all
think of it so far. It's a little different from my normal material
vocab aint as complex and content is obviously different...

when u in love//
the effects like a drug//
you cherish every hug like she's sent from above//
u feel shes the one//
and ur mission is done//
all I need in this world is my girl who will come//
to my aid by my side//
and stay when I ride//
she sheds tears when I cry//
sighs when I sigh//
jus to knowin that she's mine//
fills me with pride//
i cant even describe how I'm feelin inside//
when I'm with you all my troubles are gone//
remember that when u hearin every word that I wrote in this song//
I'll never do you wrong//
cuz our love is so strong//
when we seperated//
if I'm ever belated//
remember the emotions I have happily stated//
we'll go through our ups, but they'll come down//
we'll get through it cuz to me u r renowned//
my love for you is, so profound//
I express it with the best of my intentions//
so in this session u r my obsession//
u never have to question if I'll be there for you//
cuz honestly theres nothing I wouldnt do//
i will always be true//
I will ditch my whole crew to spend a moment with you//

[Pyrorapper]

yea...do it inna p diddy "i dont wanna know" voice and it would be great...

[da Leprechaun]

good stuff

[WHITEnight]

that would be a nice birthday gift

[Teacher]

its tight, she'll prolly like it alot.

[NewPorT]

that would be a nice birthday gift

exactly what I was thinkin


appreciate the feedback y'all

[Proofed10]

ya its pretty good...but that be a pretty cheap ass birthday present...u should get her an iPod instead..those things are sweet...but ya that was a pretty dope song..she'll like it...OOH record it ..then put it on the iPod you bought her...pyce

[NewPorT]

lol man, I cant afford an iPod for myself
and u expect me to get my girl one?
I am gona record it, I already got a beat
I jus gotta finish the track

[-SnipeR-]

nice, i like it

[NewPorT]

ya its pretty good...but that be a pretty cheap ass birthday present...u should get her an iPod instead..those things are sweet...but ya that was a pretty dope song..she'll like it...OOH record it ..then put it on the iPod you bought her...pyce

things from ur heart, mean much more to
a women than somethin u can buy. thats part
of her gift though. I'm buy her somethin too,
just havent figured out what yet, I got the money
but no ideas on what to buy

[NewPorT]

Recorded Sloppy Copy

I recorded this a lil while ago
shit needs a lil work
I was tired and tryin to be quiet
so I wouldnt wake up my dad
u wanna hear it download it
u'll get the overall idea of
where I was tryin to go
lemme know what ya think
honestly...


Anthonie - Maggie

[DoubleG]

nice man

[Pyrorapper]

yo it got unhosted or summin? can i hear it?

[Soldier_]

nice spit that game...lol

[NewPorT]

appreciate it,

pyro jus right click save target as
http://www.powow.com/chaosinc/Anthonie%20-%20Maggie