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    looking to where i'm going/ not where i've been/
    i'm lyrically challanged/ I speak within/take a deep breath/
    It took all i had two speak two lines/
    my mind is unstable/ Explodes at anytime/
    sometimes i wonder it rains,thunder my rhymes put you in a plunder
    so give up Surrender/ i try my hardest to write one verse/
    as i pratice my rhymes only get worse/
    what do i need to do to get a fine flow of word's/
    it's not like i have the opturnity to get out "Heard"
    i live in a town of 5000/ as i grab for strings i only grab threads/
    so help me out put some influance into my head/
    give me some pointers but critizem is even better


    feed back please
    Impress me First

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    your kEWL!!

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