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    jut hit me up on some feed back evryone

    Swift is my name, pimpings my game. im the white ni**a that always gets blamed. shoot, shoot, kill, kill, keep runing yo mouth and blood surely be spilled, one day in my shoes u'll be sipping them boo's tapping yo feet while singing the blues. while spitting my song ur girl drops her thong. gets on her knees and starts sucking my shlong. so now u see my pimp hand is strong, one verse from my shit and ur girls on my shlong. when i shoot to kill it never feels wrong. maybe its cause my mentalitys strong. so back down bitch we'll never be switched u'll never be me and ill never be bitched.......

    hit me upp all

  • #2
    ight anyone wanna hit me back with some feedback or anything

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    • #3
      you've got some good word usage, but your consistancy needs work.
      Thanx 2 Drifta 4 the av.

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      • #4
        thanx man for the feedback if anyone else got any it will all be apricieated.

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        • #5
          yo shit is weak, makes u sound like a geak, u should jump off dis shyt fo' yo brains start 2 leak
          cuz i neva read nethin like wut u jus wrote, u should think of gettin sum1 2 write 4 u, a ghost
          i bet u deep throat, and take it like a hoe, cuz u seem like a bitch who aint got nuttin 2 show
          ya rhymes hurts more den a slug in a chest, jus take a rest, fo' i come shoot thru yo vest

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          • #6
            Im spitting my rhymes on verse at a time, line by like, im killing bitches straight thru my rhymes, fuck the nine id rather strangle this fucking bitch, tie the rope around ur throat and dangle u u fucking bitch. yo man im in school and class bout over ill come at yo ass more when i get home bout 2 ight man im out.

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            • #7
              Its obvious that you both are far worst than amatuers/ Instead of flowin like you got somethin, Strap on some pampers/ Then give up on rap/ Unless you accidently turn black/ Its a fact that your wack/ Before a collaberation with either of you, I'd make myself have a heartattack/ Or rhyme wit nsync, Hook up wit R kelly or do some songs wit pink/ Or cut myself on my wrist till blood fills the sink/ Im rhyme at a fast pace to where you cant hardly blink/ Without a missin a couple bars or without havin to think/ Bout what in the world he just said/ This kid must rhyme as hes sleepin in bed/ theres no way you can beat me without thinkin ahead/ and if you catch up to my talent/ Then ima create a different typa genre and accent/ Create two double albums, Go platinum and have em framed on my wall/ All because I followed in my heroes shadow and now I work with sean paul

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