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    let me tell you a story of a boy that went to my school/
    kind of hyper, and wasnt really that cool/
    but if you looked at him, you couldnt help but love him/
    he was just so sweet, you coudnlt help but hug him/
    he was always tryna make people happy/
    that is, until they day he lost his daddy/
    but no matter what, he always had a smile on his face/
    walk around, passed gas just to mark his place/
    he read everything that was in his sight/
    we so intelligent, who knew he would hill himself one night/
    he was just so happy and outgoing/
    but he commited suicide with no depression showing/
    he had everyone embrasses in his powerful spell/
    coulnt help but anticipate to see him, as a way of leavin hell/
    he would run down the hallways singing stupid songs/
    sometimes acted as if he didnt know right from wrong/
    but everyone still loved him, no matter how weird he was/
    no one knows, why he wanted to leave this world with a fuss/
    parents found him in his room hangin by a belt/
    stared at him in fear, knowin he couldnt be helped/
    but no matter how big ya problems are, sucide isnt the way to go/
    people do love you, that you should really know/

    Chorus: think about it before you put it in action/think of the future, not the happieness ya lackin/just know, that theres no comin back/ now just think, for ya get that rope on the rack/ 2x

    now my school is so lonley without this kid/
    seems like im now the only on in it/
    suicide is just a premanent solution to a temporary problem/
    shit, instead of being a coward, just fuckin solve em!/
    too many people are dyin for unessasary reasons/
    most by a rope, just to not cause bleedin/
    i once took a belt around my neck and was gonna kill muself/
    but then though of my goals, and that gave me lots of help/
    now, most are depressed and start cuttin they wrists/
    not knowin, they just puttin they self at risk/
    in school, they sit int he back where its far/
    they just dont want they teacher to see they wrists full of scars/
    start comin home, lockin they bedroom door/
    get out they pocket knife, knowin they gonna see blood for sure/
    think of the pain your gonna put everyone through/
    shit, that should be enought to stop you/
    this kid, i just cnat get him off my mind/
    didnt know him THAT well, but sometimes break down an cry/
    you really dont know how much you lovein someone til ya loose em/
    thats how it is with him, shit sometimes, i thought i could shoot him/
    but now i realize he was a great guy/
    and i just cant help but wonder why/
    why he did what he did/
    especially at such a young age, he was just a kid/
    see, suicide just is not the way to go/
    even if you are depressed, people still love you, ya know/
    and dont do it if a family member died/
    do you really wanna see more hurt in ya family's eyes?/
    dont end ya life cuz of what a person said/
    it aint worth hangin ya self by the neck/
    maybe things just arent goin ya way/
    but if you beleive and contineue one, things will get better someday/
    youve got ya whole life ahead of you, that why i made this rhyme/
    dont kill ya self over shit that will get better in time/

    Chorus 2x
    Love, live life, proceed, progress

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    can i get feedback?
    Love, live life, proceed, progress

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    • #3
      No,u are wack and u are fat...and ugly with small tits .

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      • #4
        the only part of that whole song that actually could be used as something to flow with was the chorus, but extend your vocabulary, Work on NEW rhymez. Be creative as possible
        INTERESTED IN BEING PART OF THE MIDWEST UNDERGROUND ?

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        • #5
          Originally posted by Ill motherfucke
          No,u are wack and u are fat...and ugly with small tits .
          have you seen me? no. and why did you say "no".. cuz you gave me feedback, you ignoramous.
          Love, live life, proceed, progress

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          • #6
            timmy u r giving him tips on how to improve when his shit was whack and had no multis at all.

            u didnt even tell me how to improve.
            Originally Posted by FaB514
            You have to preserve the color of your skin or else everyone will be brown
            Eminem started sucking ass after 8 Mile. He can't rap worth shit now.

            fabbeddockamam

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            • #7
              Originally posted by Symptom
              have you seen me? no. and why did you say "no".. cuz you gave me feedback, you ignoramous.
              yes i have seen u stupid bitch i am in ur class .

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              • #8
                LMAO^^^, aight what class? name the fuckin teacher.
                Love, live life, proceed, progress

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                • #9
                  good stuff
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                  • #10
                    hahahahahaha 'i am in your class'... hahaha that was funny

                    ahh man
                    I'm making a D12World comeback

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                    • #11
                      hahahah i forgot wat i posted on this page, so i came back here to read what i wrote.. and i saw that guy say hes in your class and i started laughin again... imma go to this thread daily
                      I'm making a D12World comeback

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                      • #12
                        ^^^lol
                        DISTURBED KID IS BACK LIKE A MUTHA FUCKA

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