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    20 minutes of just some mind expression. In this one though, theres too much tension, and im a little worried about all yall's comprehension.










    Iím savage-when-I-strike bring my outer violence-to-mics
    a tyrant-with-type, instincts are tribal-when-i-write
    my science-is-tight, split an atom with a sharp scalpel
    Iím part talent, part practice, my art-is-average
    a heart-of-stallions, hold words for ransom and incite fear-in-letters
    a frontier-is-only-a-measure, don't trust vision my ears-are-better
    I feel-the-stretcher and hear-terror in the moment-of-death
    put my pieces in motion-like-chess, but i fall in the ocean-of-depth
    where the good are swollen-with-no-help, soulless-they-yell
    stressing-is-hell, how can i talk, they've stolen-my-breath
    turning your back in a second, you could lose all you got
    be caught in the wrong neighborhood to fall and get shot
    too small-for-a-spot, we're discriminating all sorts of peeps
    races and religions are for big brother to sort-the-heap
    then abort-the-cheap, export-the-weak, and take-all-riches
    wake you from sleep, before my body's found dead-in-ditches
    I'm a be baked-like-witches, for believing in magic and spells
    my concoctions will bring discussion long after my tragic end
    and im a manage-to-sell just enough copies to ravage-the-west
    they think Iím savage-at-best till they see my ashes-are-blessed
    my fabric-will-test the quest of man, how long-we-survive
    nations are wrong-to-arrive at the conclusion the strong-must-thrive
    to say who the lesser man is, you should first switch places
    the aggressor-is-a-whiz, for making us think in terms-of-races
    a fools pride lets ignorance live ignoring the love inside
    happiness is not always found in wealth or far above-your-mind
    when the glove-of-time comes off, below we all look the same
    A book-with-a-name but no cover, is the crook-to-blame??
    the sky is the only weight on my shoulder, i'm an inch-close-to-exploding
    i lift a boulder or a feather for shelter, to some those-are-heroics
    you can find happiness in freedom, religion and your family
    a tragedy and agony is no reason for weakness, but actually
    an opportunity to re-assess you own life and try to change
    for a pot of gold to sell my soul i won't die-for-change
    I won't cry-it's-strange, or waste tears without reason
    Iím a taste fears and keep moving like the years-and-seasons
    it aint clear or genius, and there ain't no sheet-with-a-thesis
    don't mistreat-the-believers, at least they can retreat-to-Jesus
    faith is a curse and blessing, possessing strong morals to hold
    but men are corrupt obsessing with power, being immortal with gold
    the devil is cold, but only exists in the heart of men to frighten
    priest used the pen-to-enlighten that Adam and eve then-were-titans
    to send us to heaven until science and the church became rivals
    ignited the flame-of-survival, was men from animal or was his aim-higher
    the product of climate, and millions of eons of genetic mutation
    Mayans were giants and Egyptians left walls of phonetic-quotations
    was it the Blacks or whites subjected to cosmetic-coloration
    was it god that lighted the sun, or just magnetic-vibration
    every answer is another question, and every question a step to truth
    you can watch this session to freshen your mind or press muteÖ (arguingsm

    -E-/<ulit-
    Wins- 3
    Losses- 1
    KO- 2

    Last Victom: BigMack





    *Now you could buy yourself one of those first class tickets to the resurrection*

  • #2
    any thoughts about this one guys?
    Wins- 3
    Losses- 1
    KO- 2

    Last Victom: BigMack





    *Now you could buy yourself one of those first class tickets to the resurrection*

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    • #3
      Ok- I didnt know, this post had no meaning to it. I mean damn
      Wins- 3
      Losses- 1
      KO- 2

      Last Victom: BigMack





      *Now you could buy yourself one of those first class tickets to the resurrection*

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      • #4
        its just really long... i cant read that much at once but what i did read sounded very good :-) keep it up <3
        B R E A K * T H E * R U L E S
        [ .s.t.a.n.d. * .a.p.a.r.t. ]
        ->> iGnOrE yOuR hEaD aNd
        | FoLLoW | yOuR HeArT|

        All My Pics!?!

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        • #5
          WHOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! SLOW DOWN BUDDY! lol. it was good. lil complicated cuzz you had to stop and think cuzz the second line confused you till you figured out wut the first line meant. does that make sence? lol

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