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    You know I make wrong decisions
    Every time I hear your derisions
    So I'm sorry I said some gibberish
    Being rude without making any senses

    As you remarked about my writing
    Yes, it is a work of one lunatic
    Who still don't understand the meaning
    Of life, by the others he's seen pathetic

    From my families to my companions
    I brought them a shame and disgrace
    Wasting time offending the ones
    And I still regret it every single days

    I always give a damn that makes me
    foolish, ignorant and childish for my age
    Even though I am not supposed to be
    Whenever you test me intentionally

    Next time you mock me, I'll consider
    Before I act realising you set me a trap
    Purposefully to see me how wiser
    I become without expecting for a hap

    I finally understand the life goes wrong
    And I should keep the faith and control
    Because I sometimes make mistakes
    I should accept every opinions from you all

    I cannot find the reason to curse you
    But me for overreacting childishly
    If there are two words that I want to
    Truly say to you is that I am sorry!
    Back for the first time, the joke's on you.....

  • #2
    great work
    flows really nicely
    i like the last two verses the best
    ... it's no surprise, that I got lost in your brown eyes ...

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    • #3
      good job man...i like it!
      i live on da east coast too man and if you don't got a groupie...youll find one here.

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      • #4
        thanks lot.....
        Back for the first time, the joke's on you.....

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