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    i wrote this in class today...not the greatest

    Now just sit back & listen to what my heartache is all about
    Ill do my best to not get upset, scream or shout
    But think about it, put yourself in my position
    Loving you is easy, getting you to love me my mission
    I have tried my best, did all that I could
    Asked you out, June 16, you finally said you would
    Felt like my prayers were answered, my dream finally came true
    Didnít need anything else, now that I finally had you
    Invested so much in you, still hoping you are the one
    Even went against some friends, they said I was dumb
    Nothing nobody could say to me , I was following my heart
    We have something special, I felt it from the start
    I loved you and hoped you loved me, thatís all that mattered
    Now 4 months later, my heart is starting to get battered
    Iím still in love with you but I just donít know
    Iím hoping and wishing but will this love grow?
    Hoping it will blossom like caterpillar to butterfly
    Almost perfect and beautiful, with no questions why
    But thats mostly in fairytales & this is the real world
    Anyone can see all the love I have for this beautiful girl
    But to her it must feel like its not that apparent
    Sometimes I feel like Casper, just as transparent
    Does she love me as much as I do her
    Or does she want things to go back to the way they were?
    No more uncertainty, now I need to know
    Does she really love me cuz sometimes it doesnít show



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    it's well written, but the first half is really familiar for some reason.

    a very sweet piece.

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