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  • Probly The One. Check Da Bars then Holla At The Kyd No Games Spit from the heart.

    yo she aint get this yet but thats no1 on heres business. juss check da bars and leave me feed. thx.

    When im wit you mami i get those thoughts in the back of my head/
    like damn she the one ima give everything to when im done stackin my bread/
    its even a ring i would get, to put on ya fingers and look in ya eyes and say how much u mean to the kid/
    im on some grown man shit, i aint tryna scheme for a hit/
    cuz i want u in my life, not to leave me for shit/
    if i say its real then believe in da verse/
    cuz ma its real, plz believe in the verse/
    you the special female, not one id leave for the birds/
    cuz ima die tryna get your everything, if i cant ima leave in a herse/
    other girls feenin and schemin, but i aint tryna feed in the thirst/
    cuz bein heartbroken is painful, so if u leave u gon see how my heart bleed when its hurt/
    anything wrong wit ya gear? ima get it up before these birds try to clown/
    i dont need a 2nd chance, cuz it'll be perfection da first time around/
    your special ta me, you got sometin these girls cant have/
    and me leavin you? thats like sayin every1 in the world wont pass/
    if u want somethin, its nothin, from my pockets them big faces im removin/
    everytime i close my eyes, its no lie i see ya face as an illusion/
    yea i know the bond is kinda tight between us/
    but im willin to make you my wifey and everything gon be right between us/
    any n1gga wanna disrespect, no tellin what the tens might do/
    before i go to sleep, i pray to god everytime cuz he blessed me wit a friend like you/
    therefore, u aint never gon see the lies fall out/
    gangstaness is what these guys call out/
    but if u passed no tellin ima cry till my eyes fall out/
    i cant go a day, u the one ima have to miss boo/
    i couldnt see you deceased cuz ima make sure they bury me in that casket wit you/
    you was there to brighten up my days when nobody would/
    and you'd put a smile on my face like nobody could/
    hate on me and you? nah nobody should/
    cuz if u aint here wit me, i aint tryna talk to nobody good/
    i know what u was thinkin, im probly spittin game from the start/
    nah, what i was sayin came from the heart/
    and now im hopin nothin doesnt take us apart/
    if i had body paint id probly sketch my name on ya heart/
    u may think im on some G Shit but look i aint like those guys/
    cuz before ya tear dropped to the pavement i would wipe those eyes/
    i hate bein heartbroken, so im doin shit to perfection not so u can go thru the shit i did/
    you so special, if i couldnt make u my wifey i was gon wish i did/
    Last edited by Asif; 10-12-2004, 09:57 PM.
    Originally posted by JMG
    yeah my shoes were 130 plus tax. i make more money than anyone in here

  • #2
    Holla'ring ring ring back

    Lucky Gurl!!!!!!!

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    • #3
      werd, yo thanks for checkin the verse.

      i ono how the rest of these bullshit so called "poetry" pieces get more replies than this....i honestly think most of the shit on this page is garbage. notice i said MOST...especially the garbage Psycho69 writes and gets mad replies.

      but yO that aint the point, thx for the checkin the bars Nemrac, i appreaciate the feed dun, stay up
      Originally posted by JMG
      yeah my shoes were 130 plus tax. i make more money than anyone in here

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      • #4
        my mayne asif is so poetic....it's like he is in touch wit his femine side
        Joop Gruis is my supplier

        PS Fuck a middle man, I'm Columbian I am the connect

        Why u coppin him bathin apes, cuz he the type to work in a zoo bathin apes

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        • #5
          Just write homie, no need to critisize others work..So settle down and check your own damn bars.

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          • #6
            Originally posted by ZMorrisCellphne
            This is some of the worst shit I have ever seen. I'm now going to make like Oedipus and gouge my eyes out, you fucking piece of ghetto trash. Go rob somebody.
            piece of ghetto trash? i grew up in an urban environment, how else do u expect me to express myself? in a scholary way? but yO that dont mean im stupid either, im goin to college and all that, but this is suttin im doin for myself, not for school, so ima write however i feel....and i dont gotta rob no1, i got money, but if u was here, id rob you.

            Originally posted by Friggity Fresh
            Just write homie, no need to critisize others work..So settle down and check your own damn bars.
            if u talkin to me....who said i cant criticise other people's work? u? na im sorry your opinion dont matter much to me if thats the case.

            Originally posted by TheRealAshland
            my mayne asif is so poetic....it's like he is in touch wit his femine side
            weerd thx for the feedback ma. yea i aint no thug but its not like im feminine either, when u got some1 or suttin to inspire u to write, itz a wrap.
            Originally posted by JMG
            yeah my shoes were 130 plus tax. i make more money than anyone in here

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            • #7
              Yo asif... I can relate...That shit's fer real man... True heart
              don't listen to these players they just jealous cuz your flow proofs the spark...

              Keep it real for yourself...
              I was taught "a true man will find himself standing alone
              at the battles end when he turns around to congradulate his friends and he's learned
              they all bailed out on him..."

              School of hard knocks.... was never learned in a school book.

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              • #8
                You post this and come out of nowhere and diss me.

                Why is your shit suddenly so great and mine is garbage?

                *rolls eyes*

                You don't have to bitch and point out other people who can get more views then you.

                Quit your whining and get over it.
                Now let the night be dark for all of me.
                Let the night be too dark for me to see
                Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

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                • #9
                  Originally posted by Psycho69
                  You post this and come out of nowhere and diss me.

                  Why is your shit suddenly so great and mine is garbage?

                  *rolls eyes*

                  You don't have to bitch and point out other people who can get more views then you.

                  Quit your whining and get over it.
                  what?? i cant have an opinion?? dun i didnt say your shit IS garbage, i said i THINK your shit is garbage. difference between a DISS and an opinion. getcha facts right dun, no hate or nothin but u juss interpreted it wrong.

                  Originally posted by krkryptwalker
                  Yo asif... I can relate...That shit's fer real man... True heart
                  don't listen to these players they just jealous cuz your flow proofs the spark...

                  Keep it real for yourself...
                  I was taught "a true man will find himself standing alone
                  at the battles end when he turns around to congradulate his friends and he's learned
                  they all bailed out on him..."

                  School of hard knocks.... was never learned in a school book.
                  werd yO im glad u could relate to it, means u know exactly how i feel. thx for the positive words too but i dont really let other people's words get to me if its meaningless, but i take constructive criticism pretty aight. Thx for your words tho stay up.
                  Originally posted by JMG
                  yeah my shoes were 130 plus tax. i make more money than anyone in here

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                  • #10
                    And my opinion is you come off as someone who is simply whining and complaining.
                    Now let the night be dark for all of me.
                    Let the night be too dark for me to see
                    Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

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                    • #11
                      go bitch on your own thread about it.
                      Originally posted by JMG
                      yeah my shoes were 130 plus tax. i make more money than anyone in here

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                      • #12
                        Nah.
                        Now let the night be dark for all of me.
                        Let the night be too dark for me to see
                        Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

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                        • #13
                          LMAO at the fight


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                          I felt it, AsIf.....keep it up *****
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                          • #14
                            *looks over the thread again*

                            I don't see a "fight".
                            Now let the night be dark for all of me.
                            Let the night be too dark for me to see
                            Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

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