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  • Unreliable Love

    Got motivated by something....

    Unreliable Love

    Apparently, Love never dies but if thatís true
    Do you love me as much as you say you do?

    Shattered and scared of whatís yet to come
    Wish you would tell me so it could be over & done
    Broken and lost of thoughts of what youíll say
    Please say you love me, please let me stay

    We have a history but itís not a proper one
    Youíre there, Iím here, and I wait for you to come
    Bask in my presence, taste the lust I feel
    Hold me close, give me strength and zeal

    Our present is on a course not smooth but rough
    So I wonder to myself, Ďwill love be enough?í
    To break through the darkness, onto the light
    Just you and I no more hurt no more fights

    The future is unreliable and who knows whatís there
    Could be happiness or pain, but look what we have here
    Right now apparently, you love me and I you
    But Iím still at a loss; you see Iím still so confused

    Iím shattered; Iím scared, what lies up ahead?
    Today and tomorrow is something I dread
    Unsure of what will happen each coming day
    Just know I want to be forever trapped in your way

    But apparently Love never dies; I hope that itís true
    Tell me, do you love me as much as you say you do?
    ... it's no surprise, that I got lost in your brown eyes ...

  • #2
    awww.... love is always a question.uknowutamsayin?

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    • #3
      dope.. good shit and mad props
      ++++++++++++
      _________________

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      • #4
        Kinda reminded me of old love poems I used to write.

        I liked it alot

        Now let the night be dark for all of me.
        Let the night be too dark for me to see
        Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

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        • #5
          That feeling of just wanting that person to just find you wherever and swoop you up and away forever.but when????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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          • #6
            Thanks for the feedback everyone...
            really appreciate it

            nemracSD - 'but when???' apparently never... 2#:-(
            ... it's no surprise, that I got lost in your brown eyes ...

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            • #7
              Unrealiable Love is a really cool poem, I am sure all of us have experienced love like that b4.

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              • #8
                Wow.. nice...

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                • #9
                  Gemma, you put into words so many fears that I can relate to right now. With each of your works you further exemplify the ups n downs of being in love. Thanks for posting this.
                  "Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before." - Poe

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                  • #10
                    Thanks
                    ... it's no surprise, that I got lost in your brown eyes ...

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                    • #11
                      that was a very good poem ..
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                      .... isuru

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                      • #12
                        even through im a girl, im not really into all that corny stuff BUT

                        this was very good.

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                        • #13
                          Man that is brilliant
                          BIG BIG BIG mad props
                          OH HAI!

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