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    some background on this poem...

    wrote it after a visit to the hospital. See, I was diagnosed with diabetes last year and the doc plainly put it: you gonna die in your early thirties.

    Motherfuck even said "33" as an approx. age. I doubt that'll be the thing to kill me, but yeah... Check it I guess.


    33

    They say this is my date
    To meet my fate
    My life needs a rearrange
    I'll die if things don't change

    The possibility of already having lived half my life
    At the age of 16 is a jagged knife
    I ain't surprised
    My time here's been compromised

    33 leads to 666
    Is this a sign?
    Does it even matter?
    At this point deaths embrace
    puts a smile on my face

    My only fear of death
    Is the eternal flames that await my soul
    Never ending eternal flames
    Come to engulf me whole

    To live life up
    or to live life to die
    To live it up
    or to await my demise

    What would be worse
    A short and fun life
    or a long and dull one
    Dare I dream now?

  • #2
    Originally posted by Delinquent Fait
    some background on this poem...

    wrote it after a visit to the hospital. See, I was diagnosed with diabetes last year and the doc plainly put it: you gonna die in your early thirties.

    Motherfuck even said "33" as an approx. age. I doubt that'll be the thing to kill me, but yeah... Check it I guess.


    33

    They say this is my date
    To meet my fate
    My life needs a rearrange
    I'll die if things don't change

    The possibility of already having lived half my life
    At the age of 16 is a jagged knife
    I ain't surprised
    My time here's been compromised

    33 leads to 666
    Is this a sign?
    Does it even matter?
    At this point deaths embrace
    puts a smile on my face

    My only fear of death
    Is the eternal flames that await my soul
    Never ending eternal flames
    Come to engulf me whole

    To live life up
    or to live life to die
    To live it up
    or to await my demise

    What would be worse
    A short and fun life
    or a long and dull one
    Dare I dream now?
    nice nice nice
    FUCK YOU BITCH!!!! YEA YOU

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    • #3
      That's why you my boy, Harry. Good shit.

      What up, Realize.
      Myspace

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      • #4
        much love.

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        • #5
          last 8 lines was nice, i cant relate.

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          • #6
            really true poem

            friend of mine got told when he was gonna die, doctors told him he had like 3 or 4 days, though he had cancer, but he was alive for another 3 months after that...so i sorta see where you're coming from with this.
            like it
            ... it's no surprise, that I got lost in your brown eyes ...

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            • #7
              Hmmm... that is some fucked up shit.. dude really said 33? damn.

              Nice shit by the way.. can tell it came from the heart.

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              • #8
                thats deep
                i can relate, i feel that
                it touched something inside me
                Mystery
                Another Fallen Soldier
                ~Rest In Piece Marvin, Mark, Leona, Proof & Kasey J~

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                • #9
                  this is a little old huh
                  ... it's no surprise, that I got lost in your brown eyes ...

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                  • #10
                    Originally posted by SneakySnufflez
                    this is a little old huh
                    lmao

                    This was like my 2nd post on d12world.

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                    • #11
                      Originally posted by SneakySnufflez
                      this is a little old huh
                      sometimes its good to dig up someones grave and give them a longer life span
                      Mystery
                      Another Fallen Soldier
                      ~Rest In Piece Marvin, Mark, Leona, Proof & Kasey J~

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                      • #12
                        well, i like it! it makes me want to read more.. but, thats just my thought.. Nice Work, ~!~Ash~!~ ohh and, Happy Valentines Day

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                        • #13
                          Originally posted by Mystery
                          sometimes its good to dig up someones grave and give them a longer life span

                          shame
                          new rule enforced

                          ... it's no surprise, that I got lost in your brown eyes ...

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