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    watching the hours tick away
    this needs to get done....no more time to delay
    the page is blank...my imagination is blocked
    in a head to head battle with my arch rival the clock
    nothings coming out right
    ive been at this thing the whole damn night
    and what do i have to show for it....nothing
    i got my poker face on
    but you can tell im bluffing
    sitting here looking all calm
    inside im huffing and puffing
    where are the words when i really need em
    im suppose to give this to her on our first real 'meeting'
    now it looks like im buying another hallmark card
    why on earth is this so hard
    its like theres a lock on my head
    any new ideas have been barred
    right when there are so many things that need to be said
    how can i tell her how i really feel
    when i cant even open up and reveal
    the heart buried beneath this armour of steel
    maybe i just did
    maybe everything i wanted to say i just said
    maybe shell understand everything once these words are read
    maybe everything i wanted her to see shell see
    maybe...

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    i like this
    came across well, can see nervousness in it
    last 5 lines were my favourite, mainly cuz all the lines started with maybe and it ended with that one word.
    but, good work
    ... it's no surprise, that I got lost in your brown eyes ...

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